Mermay - Children story
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@miriam Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it.
I had not noticed that, maybe because I always know where is his body. But you are right, the face and the water have similar color and the color of the line doesn´t help too much. Maybe I will change the color of the water, more darken. -
Day 17 and 18
After some feedback I did some changes to illustration 17. I uploaded it with day 18 that both make a doble page of this little story.

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Day 19 and 20

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Day 21

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Day 22

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@flordevitaz I love the way you use colour in these, its beautiful, really interesting you don't rely on value but really push the hue and saturation
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@sheri_p79 said in Mermay - Children story:
Thank you. I love to work more with the saturation of the colors. I like my illustrations to have a brilliant colors.
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Day 23

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Day 24

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Day 25

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@flordevitaz
The changes look good--it's easy to see the eel now.
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Day 26

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@miriam Yes, the illustration looks better. Thanks for the feedback.
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Day 27

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Day 28

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Day 29

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Day 30

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Day 31
It´s finally over


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@flordevitaz Congratulations! You did a great job of keeping your characters and design consistent throughout the series.