Hidden WIP

[stringfellowart]

Thoughts on color

[TessaW]

These are lovely. In this latest post, I think both a very strong and you could go with your personal fav, but as far as color goes, I like the bottom one with the rain coat. If you end up choosing the top one, I'd try to get more of the color patterning you have in the other one. A bit of that warm purple and greens in the background and a yellow element in the foreground.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@stringfellowart i you colors on these last 2 illustrations. I also love your line art! I love the scratchinees and texture of it. If only there’s a way you can preserve them into your final piece, i would really love to see it.

[Pamela Fraley]

@stringfellowart I love where these are going and the colors are

[Donfito]

-I think in the first one you can explore the different blue colors, to make a beautiful almost monochromatic scene with little color touches.

-In the second one you have a clear focal point that is the yellow coat, and you can take advantage of this making a big contrast with the cold background.

but at the end both of them look amazing, my fav is #2

[stringfellowart]

Okay, here is the final sketch. I don't know about all that details. Apparently I'm a glutton for punishment.

[stringfellowart]

Progress

[stringfellowart]

Trying to keep this one more painterly.

[stringfellowart]

Ugh, I'm at that stage of the painting where I hate it and just want to chuck it. I can't tell if its just because I'm like 80% there. And the reflections are killing me. Or if something is not working.

[braden H]

@stringfellowart

"I'm at that stage of the painting where I hate it and just want to chuck it."

I feel your pain. I hate that stage so much...

What's even worse is that sometimes a painting we initially hate will come out fine and it won't have that stage. But most paintings I feel really good about in the beginning ALWAYS have the "this painting sucks, now..." stage. Ugh...

Looks great to me, though!

[TessaW]

So beautiful! If I had one suggestion- it's that perhaps the archway area is a little too contrast-y. It frames his head nicely, but the contrast of the dark stone with the green foliage is a bit harsh. My eyes tend to get drawn past his head to the arch and get stuck there.

[stringfellowart]

@tessaw good suggestion thanks

[stringfellowart]

This painting has made me use many dirty words. But I think I've finally worked out the reflections, so just the details are left. And the composition is way lopsided. But I just have to get it done.

[Jonas Zavacky]

@stringfellowart the reflections looks great! Good to see that you follow through! I am excited to see the final look

[Jason Bowen]

Looks really good. The only thing I would say is the rear hand looks a bit weird on the main character, maybe the thumb needs opening out a bit and the fingers should over hang the cerb like the other hand...

[braden H]

Looking forward to seeing the final version! Looks great so far.

[Chip Valecek]

@stringfellowart the water reflections look great, you could use this image to wash your dirty mouth LOL.