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      Alberto M last edited by Alberto M

      4-practicas-perspectiva.jpg
      4-practicas-draweverythin.jpg

      constructing hurts

      using that motorbike would hurt more anyways

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      • Lee White
        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

        Very cool Alberto! This is a difficult subject and feels sort of like math (which no one seems to like much!). Great that you are putting in the time to master it.

        There is one area that you should really work on early so you don't practice the wrong thing. Distortion in linear perspective is a real pain, but is easy to overcome with a few principles. The more points you add, the more this stuff matters (ie, two point won't distort as much as three point).

        In order to make this easier to understand, I did a quick draw over. I pointed out in yellow the boxes that were starting to get away from you. The reason these shapes distorted is the points were too close together and the shapes actually went outside of the usable area. This can't happen in reality. The easy fix is keep your image way inside the vanishing points and you will be safe. An added layer of safety in three point perspective is keep your horizon line out of the picture.

        I made two boxes in the top right illustration. both boxes use the same vanishing points. Box A stays inside the points, box B goes outside the points. You can see how it starts to get kinda wacky out there in no mans land.

        The illustration at the bottom is how I would recommend practicing 3 point perspective at the beginning. Keep the points as wide as you can. Even off the page. The result is I actually can't draw outside the usable area and the shapes won't distort.

        Hope that helps some! Keep up the great (and difficult!) work. : )

        Cheers,
        Lee

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        SVS Faculty Instructor
        www.leewhiteillustration.com

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          Reid Smith last edited by

          Dude--this is pretty sweet. I love how my peers can help me in actual, concrete ways and not just with a 'needs help' or 'looks good'. This is awesome--so glad I am on this forum!

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            Alberto M @Lee White last edited by

            @Lee-White

            Thanks!
            Very clear.

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              Alberto M last edited by

              nonsense.jpg
              I'm going to study from still life for perspective, my brain is empty of basic shapes right now
              after last attempt, wanted to know how to cast shadows accurately so did this
              space-study2-calculating-cast-shadows.jpg

              finally a badly drawn thumbnail idea for next challenge, I will have to build somethings and take pictures, to refer at it
              lol.jpg

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              • Lee White
                Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                much better with the 3 point drawing!

                the thumbnail is a good idea, I'd just play with the perspective and angles a bit more. I can see the stalk growing up from the ground which is awesome, but then it crosses the picture plane horizontally which tends to make things look stable. That's the last thing you want in this piece. If you really want to make him feel like he's dangling, thing about changing that stalk shape and really dangling your character precariously from it.

                SVS Faculty Instructor
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                  Alberto M last edited by

                  children's book ilustration design thumbnail, without drawing yet, time to draw it :8

                  jake-thumb.jpg

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                  • Rob Smith
                    Rob Smith last edited by

                    I like your new sketch...it gives the feeling that the character is in peril.

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                    • Lee White
                      Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      Wow, much better!!! Love the way you are approaching your skill building!

                      SVS Faculty Instructor
                      www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                      • Steve Young
                        Steve Young last edited by

                        I the pose is really good, make sure you put plenty of atmospheric perspective with in it.

                        Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                          merri bun last edited by

                          these are SO GOOD

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                            Alberto M last edited by Alberto M

                            it's not going to be finished tomorrow, at this speed maybe not this year 😢

                            wasted all morning testing how I could paint/draw it, it's going sketchy

                            oh, and no jack at all

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                            if you read the story, jack is a thieft and a murder, such a child story haha

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                            • Steve Young
                              Steve Young last edited by

                              Wonderful!

                              Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                              • kai satoshi
                                kai satoshi @Alberto M last edited by

                                @Alberto-M

                                So true... All these kids stories from back in the day are so odd when you think about it.

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                                • Jiří Kůs
                                  Jiří Kůs last edited by

                                  Too bad, it looks awesome!

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                                    Alberto M last edited by Alberto M

                                    It's going somewhere
                                    I think I'm not gonna render it, instead, i'll do more linework with just a soft plain colors with gradiation. :l

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                                    peasant outfit is peasant

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                                      Alberto M last edited by

                                      played around too much as I have no process yet
                                      colormess.jpg

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                                      • Steve Young
                                        Steve Young last edited by

                                        This is coming along really well,

                                        Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                                          Alberto M last edited by

                                          passed to the next thing, I was kinda blocked in last one :l

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                                            Alberto M last edited by

                                            hard part

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