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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey last edited by

      I looked at them closely and then stepped away then compared them again. It really just feels like either 2 different versions of a character or 2 characters that are part of a duo together. I can’t say if either of them are better or worse just 2 different versions of equal quality. If that makes sense. They both give me a similar feel, they have a similar pose, similar features. I can see how you added detail but unless someone is really comparing these closely, there aren’t any major differences that make me go “this is definitely better” other than the switch in black and white.

      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
      alekseyillustration.com

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      • Kevin Longueil
        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @ArtofAleksey last edited by

        @swordofodin Thank you for the feedback - i really appreciate it!

        Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
        https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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        • Kevin Longueil
          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by Kevin Longueil

          I think i've made a breakthrough on the Witch's face - much more sinister - i think i was trying to keep her slightly sympathetic by having rounded forms in her features - discarding that idea is helping a lot! Still a work in progress of course but i finally am feeling good about her!

          0_1536176185256_Flattened 6 small.png

          Here it is sent through the cut-out filter in photoshop a la Lee White - set to 3 levels ...looks pretty close - maybe a bit more light around the eyes ...

          0_1536011082799_cuttout 3 levels.png

          Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
          https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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          • TessaW
            TessaW last edited by

            This is looking great Kevin!

            As a side note, I've noticed your website brings us to a landing page that says OZ and Not OZ. I wonder if this diminishes your other work by labeling it like this?

            Website: www.tessawrathall.com

            Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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            • Kevin Longueil
              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @TessaW last edited by Kevin Longueil

              @tessaw Thank you so much Tessa! I have been working on changing my website all morning - part of the feedback i got from Stephen Silver's skype mentorship was to make a landing page on my website and break up the content into a couple different pages - Oz related images on one page and my other work on the other page ...... can you think of a good way to label the two buttons? I just now changed the buttons to "oz series" and "illustrations"....do you think that might work better?

              Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
              https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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              • Chip Valecek
                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                @kevin-longueil I think those buttons work.


                https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
                https://www.facebook.com/cvalecek
                http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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                • kaitlinmakes
                  kaitlinmakes last edited by

                  Please let us know when this book is available! I'd love to get a copy!

                  https://www.instagram.com/kaitlin.kahn.art
                  Https://www.kaitlinkahn.com

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                  • Eli
                    Eli last edited by

                    Ok, I was wrong! She CAN be more ominous!!! Phenomenal work as usual...

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                    • JulPer
                      JulPer last edited by

                      Wow, this is amazing! I don't really have any comment on the witch, other than the current version looks way creepier and dangerous, so great job!

                      Just took a look at your portfolio and loved the OZ series, when will the book be available?

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                      • Kevin Longueil
                        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @kaitlinmakes last edited by Kevin Longueil

                        Thank you for the feedback and encouragement - i had September 24th as my deadline for having this submitted to Amazon...but i keep finding things i have to redo so i do not think i will quite make it - there are a couple more pieces i need to tweak before i submit (i really need to work on the witch's hands too) - thanks again!

                        @Eli @kaitlinmakes @JulPer @Chip-Valecek

                        Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                        https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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