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    D and D character input please

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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG last edited by

      I have two more characters to do. They are not for pay. This was basically copied from a picture my friend sent and I put her friend's face in it. Just wondering if I could get some input on anything that might be so far off that it hurts 😉 I am taking the proko figure drawing class and still in the bean stage so, I hope to improve. I don't think this is too awful. Is the face too small or the hood too big? Drawovers are welcome. Thanks! I need this and one more finished before Christmas.

      Marsha Ottum Owen

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        A Former User last edited by

        Hi there, I think you've forgotten to attach the image?

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        • MOO
          MOO SVS OG last edited by

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          Oops! forgot images. Here is the first one I posted and then the one I redid after getting a suggestion on Proko Figure Drawing facebook page. The second one I redrew the figure without clothes and then added them. I think it does look better. The pose might be weird though. Anyway, comments more than welcome.
          Thanks!
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          Marsha Ottum Owen

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          • rcartwright
            rcartwright @MOO last edited by

            @marsha-kay-ottum-owen In general you need to focus on you 3-d form construction. My suggestion is to draw you character with cubes and cylinders only and post that. Let the forum help you from the ground up so to speak. Forget about details until the foundation is in place.

            https://www.scbwi.org/members/richard-cartwright/
            https://www.instagram.com/richardwcartwright/
            https://www.pinterest.ca/richcartwright3/art-of-richard-cartwright/
            https://www.richardwcartwright.ca/

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            • KathrynAdebayo
              KathrynAdebayo last edited by

              I think your reworked pose does look much stronger. Nice!

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                @kathrynadebayo Thanks.

                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                • MOO
                  MOO SVS OG @rcartwright last edited by

                  @rcartwright Well, that happens to be the next lesson on Proko so that will be perfect! 🙂 I have another one too that I should probably share. It looks okay to me but...I may be wrong. I'll post it later after I get this one. Thanks!

                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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