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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

      @nyrrylcadiz thanks! I cant wait to color this

      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
      alekseyillustration.com

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      • LauraA
        LauraA SVS OG @ArtofAleksey last edited by LauraA

        @aleksey I am just now seeing this, but I really like the version with the darkened room! I like the overall environment. And I rather like the concept of the two staggering gnomes with their arms around each other. I like the others too, though.

        My main advice at this point would be to make sure you keep eye going towards the gnomes. Although I like the torch light, maybe if it were obviously a light source for the gnomes, or else threw them into sharp silhouette, it would put more focus on them.

        P.S. Oh wait, the inked version didn't load the first time. Now I see it. It does look good! You can do the focus part with color and value.

        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
        http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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        • ArtofAleksey
          ArtofAleksey @LauraA last edited by

          @lauraa hah thanks. Yeah I really liked the staggered gnomes too but I didnt compensate for size when i redrew it in pencil so they had to go. But they will always have a warm place on my ipad.

          I think instead of a torch I should have done a little candle next to the gnomes. But we’ll see what happens.

          Normally I would redraw it. But seeing as I want to do other work after this that has a higher priority, I’m just gonna go with it.

          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
          alekseyillustration.com

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          • NizhoniWolf
            NizhoniWolf last edited by

            Looking great so far @Aleksey !

            If you don't mind me asking, i was wondering if you digitally 'planned' all of your work on computer first? I saw that you did several sketches and a grey scale version which showed where the light and shadow sources where and I'm wondering if that helps you when you come to colour it traditionally? I'm asking because i need to learn colour etc, and it seems to be a quicker way to plan out illustrations and something worth trying ^_^

            Good luck for this months prompt!

            Find me on Facebook and instagram under NizhoniWolf, for my sketches, musings and W.I.P's!

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            • H
              hugowee last edited by

              This is so clever and well done. I cannot wait to see it in its final version! I also was wondering if you did some sketching on paper and then worked digitally? Thanks!

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              • ArtofAleksey
                ArtofAleksey @NizhoniWolf last edited by

                @nizhoniwolf @hugowee hi thanks I’m glad you like it! So the new way I started approaching my art (might change once photoshop comes out for the iPad) is I do some composition sketches first on my ipad using procreate. I then make slightly more refined sketches on a new layer. After that I do values also on ipad. When i good general sense of the image I start sketching on paper, which may take several attempts depending on how happy I am with it. The Aaracokra sketch took 2, the adventure kid took 1 because it was a simpler design and I spent more time on the character design on the ipad. For this gnome contest entry I didnt redo it even though i wanted to because this does seem to be a more time consuming process. After the pencil sketch I do an ink over it with my brush pens. Then I scan it and put it into photoshop to get rid of the red or blue pencil lines and then send it to my ipad and finish coloring it on procreate.

                instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                alekseyillustration.com

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                • NizhoniWolf
                  NizhoniWolf @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                  @aleksey Thanks for explaining your process for me ^_^

                  Find me on Facebook and instagram under NizhoniWolf, for my sketches, musings and W.I.P's!

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                  • ThisKateCreates
                    ThisKateCreates @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                    @aleksey You get good sensitivity with your line work using the brush pens. Nice!

                    https://www.instagram.com/thiskatecreates

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                    • ArtofAleksey
                      ArtofAleksey @NizhoniWolf last edited by

                      @nizhoniwolf yeah no problem. I’m really proficient with procreate. I teach it at work so feel free to ask me questions about it. As far as art goes, i still got a ways to go.

                      @ThisKateCreates thank you! I ended up using 3 different brushpens for this one. One of them ran out of ink! Then I didn’t like the second one so i switched to a pentel brush pen but the ink is water based so it takes forever to dry but I like it more.

                      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                      alekseyillustration.com

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                      • ArtofAleksey
                        ArtofAleksey last edited by

                        Ok I think I’m done. There are things I like and things I don’t like about it but overall I’m pretty happy with it. I think I should have had the bearded gnome facing inward. Original plan included 3 more gnomes that were facing inward so that would have balanced it better but it’s fine I’m satisfied with this.
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                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                        alekseyillustration.com

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