Contest entry crits needed--time sensitive

shinjifujioka

The daylit one. Good luck in the contest!!

Naroth Kean

yeah I like your daylight one as well because right now you handle your daylight scene lighting better than the 2nd one. Good luck!

Lynn Larson

Love the colors on both, but definitely prefer the daylight scene! I would get rid of the blur altogether. It makes it look half finished to me. I love environment design, and here are a couple that i think are cool...no blur, but they are loose And your character is beautiful!! Love the expressions! Now you need to do him justice

Ian McQue...love his stuff!

Paul Lasaine...

Charlie Eve Ryan

I like the daylit one too and agree that the blur is a bit distracting, maybe add in some more texture to balance it out, also maybe find a way to put a bit more dramatic lighting on your main character I feel like he is getting a bit lost in all the details of the piece. It is a fun character and nice concept, keep at it!! Lovely examples, Lynn.

mattramsey

@Charlie-Eve-Ryan said:

I like the daylit one too and agree that the blur is a bit distracting, maybe add in some more texture to balance it out, also maybe find a way to put a bit more dramatic lighting on your main character I feel like he is getting a bit lost in all the details of the piece. It is a fun character and nice concept, keep at it!! Lovely examples, Lynn.

I THINK the idea for round 2 is to have the environment as the main character and the actual character just placed in it. I could be wrong on that though.

@Lynn-Larson Thanks for the refs--I love when people take the time to do that, it's really helpful!

Lynn Larson

@mattramsey I do too, and it is so much easier to get the idea across I love your stuff, you definitely deserve to move on! Keep up the gorgeous work!

mattramsey

Relax, Just Create! ‏@relaxjustcreate 15m15 minutes ago
How's it going creators? Remember, Round 2 deadline for all contestants who advanced ends 11.10.15 at midnight EST! #clashofthecreators

Runs around room yelling The streesssss!

Lynn Larson

@mattramsey Hehe...Relax!! Take a deep breath. You got this

bharris

Day lit!

Rob Smith

I too prefer the daylit version. Neat character.