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    • xin li
      xin li last edited by xin li

      @sigross nope. I have not tried with the brush blend mode. Definitely try this tomorrow. Thanks for the suggestion.

      @Braden-Hallett I get what you mean by wanting the color comps to be perfect. I always ended up making a lot of decisions on the final painting as well. Color comps give me a rough idea. I wanted to make more decisions on this phase. However, I find it would take too much time. I need to experiment more to find a more efficient way to work with it. Currently, I try to follow David's method from the turbocharging class. It is quick enough, but I want it to be more predictable when picking the color, and a bit more precise, if it makes sense.

      I went back to check Will's video on 10 steps of digital painting. His color study was just a multiply layer. But when I tried that on my piece, it gets so muddy. I think maybe he has a much lighter tonal sketch. Maybe this method will work for me if I am doing something else than a night forest scene.

      I am leaning towards greeny blue in the bottom right. I will give it another go tomorrow.

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      • Jon Anderson
        Jon Anderson SVS OG @xin li last edited by

        @xin-li I'm leaning toward most towards that top left (purple toned) and then the bottom left (orangish yellow toned). I think the first one adds to the fear factor with the cool purple colors around the shadow.

        I get confused by Will's 10 step process when it comes time to add color, too. Maybe the light bulb moment will happen for us soon and it'll get easier.

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        • xin li
          xin li last edited by

          I think I finally made most of the major decisions for this piece. From here, I am going to paint and tweak. I followed the process from the turbocharging class, but I still feel I don't really know what I am doing most of the time. I guess it really comes down to do this process over and over again till it becomes second nature.

          final painting_process01.jpg

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          • graphitebouquet
            graphitebouquet last edited by

            Aahhh! I love this! I absolutely love the concept - it definitely was the creepiest to me. I love the design of the shadow. It's just perfect.

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            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @xin li last edited by

              @xin-li this is looking really good. It feels so scary.

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              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @xin li last edited by

                @xin-li my one suggestions is to add shadows on the girl on parts of her that are not lit like the side of her face, the back for her arms, etc in order to emphasis that it is dark and the only source of light is the lantern.

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                • xin li
                  xin li @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                  @nyrrylcadiz thanks for the feedback. I will work on that. The girl still requires a lot of work :-).

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                  • xin li
                    xin li last edited by

                    When do you guys call a painting done? I always have a problem finishing a painting. The last 10% often takes 50% of my time, then I would end up feeling I have overworked a painting. Does anyone have thoughts on how do you know when a painting is done?

                    Is there anything I could work on a bit more before I submit?
                    final-painting_02.jpg

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                    • Darian
                      Darian SVS OG @xin li last edited by

                      @xin-li I understand what you mean about when to know a painting is finished. I think it comes down to zooming out of the image and see if it works out as a whole in terms of composition & readability.

                      Another way is to squint your eyes & see if anything is standing out to you that shouldn't be standing out..which can happen as we paint along & have to re-focus the purpose of the image 🙂

                      I think it works great, I'd suggest blurring the edges of the shadow that are further away from the character to make the shadow look more believable. Another thing you could do is cool down the shadow areas of the character holding the light source.

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                      • Nathalie Kranich
                        Nathalie Kranich @xin li last edited by

                        @xin-li This is looking so cool! Reminds me of the shadow creatures in 'Don't Starve'.

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                        • xin li
                          xin li last edited by xin li

                          I am still noodling the piece. I found myself lost in the last 5%. @Darian suggested on blurring the part of the shadow which is further from the character to create depths and more believable shadow. I like the suggestion of making the shadow more blend-in and believable. But I did not like the blur effect for this particular piece. So I played with changing the value slightly on the shadow. Does this help? (left: before changing the shadow; right: after changing the shadow)
                          final-painting_02_compare.jpg

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                          • Laurel Aylesworth
                            Laurel Aylesworth @xin li last edited by

                            @xin-li I do like the one on the right because that texture and variation of color comes through the shadow, making it feel more like a shadow. Well done.

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                            • Jon Anderson
                              Jon Anderson SVS OG @xin li last edited by

                              @xin-li I agree with @Laurel-Aylesworth. I like the one on the right better. If I remember correctly the saying is something like "the last 20% of the painting takes 80% of the time" meaning those little finishing details that help separate professional work from really amateur work take a lot of time. I like how the piece turned out. I would recommend setting it aside if you think it's ready and come back to it tomorrow (with time to spare for extra work) before deadline to see if anything stands out that you want to adjust.

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                              • Johanna Kim
                                Johanna Kim SVS OG @xin li last edited by

                                @xin-li YES! I like how you treated the shadow on the right a lot. This is a fabulous piece.

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                                • Buddy Skelton
                                  Buddy Skelton last edited by

                                  I like the shadow on the left better. Makes the piece feel more ominous and suspenseful with the darker shadow and higher contrast.

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