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    • Whitney Simms
      Whitney Simms SVS OG last edited by

      Yep, no white lines needed for this one. I love how it turned out. The coloring of the tail totally give the huge clue about the mermaid! I just had to be patient. And his expression is perfect. I think you hit the nail on the head with all your words or story points with this! The no fishing sign is too much of a focal point l. I agree with the rest of the crew. Great job!

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      • Erin.Cortese
        Erin.Cortese Moderator @Chip Valecek last edited by

        @Chip-Valecek Definitely option 1! When I first
        saw your linework I was actually going to suggest trying this one without the white line.

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        • Chip Valecek
          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

          Thanks everyone!!! I guess 1 is the over all winner.


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          • Chip Valecek
            Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

            May I also add I LOVE all the advice and feedback from you guys. Its amazing the support we all get! Thanks!


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            • animatosoor
              animatosoor last edited by animatosoor

              @Chip-Valecek I realize this might be late, but I just had to drop in and say the story you're telling in this illustration really caught my eye! It's humorous and the narrative is really clear.

              Just wanted to add also that it's a refreshing spin on Mermay, and the monster design is great! Quite terrifying while also being funny.

              And for what it's worth, my vote would also have been for Option 1. It looks good. :face_savouring_delicious_food:

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              • Heather Boyd
                Heather Boyd @Chip Valecek last edited by

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                Your water is really nice.

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                • MirkaH
                  MirkaH last edited by

                  Colors are really nice, if its easy to change the scales are going the wrong way at the last 3 sections.

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                  • Chip Valecek
                    Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                    Again thanks to everyone who has helped with advice, I think it really helped a lot! Here is the final.

                    mermay19_sm.jpg


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                    • Coreyartus
                      Coreyartus Moderator last edited by

                      Oh, Chip--this looks great!!!

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                      • Chip Valecek
                        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Coreyartus last edited by

                        @Coreyartus Thanks!


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