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    Finishing Drills for a Chronic Dabbler.

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    • ShannonBiondi
      ShannonBiondi SVS OG @animatosoor last edited by

      @animatosoor Haha! Totally!! 😃 The beauty of hindsight, right?

      @abhainn_fionn

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      • Heather Boyd
        Heather Boyd @animatosoor last edited by

        @animatosoor

        Sounds good. I struggle with finishing but also well rendered work. I have 3-4 series work I plan to work on during the summer to stretch my Enviroment Design muscles 🙂

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        Be blessed,

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        • marine
          marine last edited by

          Thanks @animatosoor for the suggestions. I have definitely a full list of things missing in my portfolio! :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:
          Thanks @Chip-Valecek , it is a really good point to work on different work at the same time to avoid getting burned out!

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          • animatosoor
            animatosoor @marine last edited by animatosoor

            @marine said in Finishing Drills for a Chronic Dabbler.:

            Thanks @animatosoor for the suggestions. I have definitely a full list of things missing in my portfolio! :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:

            Hahahah, you and me both!

            Let's fill all of those gaps. It'll be an ongoing thing, I believe.

            https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

            The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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            • animatosoor
              animatosoor @ShannonBiondi last edited by

              @ShannonBiondi Lol, yeah! :face_savouring_delicious_food:

              https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

              The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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              • animatosoor
                animatosoor @Heather Boyd last edited by

                @Heather-Boyd My struggle is exactly the same. I have gaps in my knowledge when it comes to rendering, and I find myself floundering.

                All the best on your series! I suppose they would feature environments in a dominant way?

                https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                • Heather Boyd
                  Heather Boyd @animatosoor last edited by

                  @animatosoor

                  Yeah small character for the most part and larger Enviroment around.

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                  • animatosoor
                    animatosoor last edited by

                    I'm in the process of reworking my Mermay entry as a black & white illustration for my portfolio, and,

                    animatsoorMerMay_b&w.jpg

                    • also working on this in colour!

                    ToyDemon_3.jpg

                    Any feedback would always be welcome!

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                    • animatosoor
                      animatosoor last edited by

                      My progress so far on Toy Demon. If anyone sees this and has any words of advice on rendering issues, I would really appreciate it!

                      ToyDemon_4.jpg

                      https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                      The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                      • Darian
                        Darian SVS OG @animatosoor last edited by

                        @animatosoor looking good! is the focus on the red toy or the green creature? I'd say right now, both are getting equal importance (atleast for me 🙂 ) I think you will have to reduce the saturation of either the toy or the green creature.

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                        • animatosoor
                          animatosoor @Darian last edited by

                          Thanks for your input, @Darian! I would want the focus to be on the green creature, with the toy being a close second. I'm going to go work on the saturation. 🙂

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                          The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                          • Darian
                            Darian SVS OG @animatosoor last edited by

                            @animatosoor I would say you are close! I'd suggest de-saturating the red a little.. like in the previous image with the blue background, but to a lesser extent 🙂

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                            • animatosoor
                              animatosoor last edited by

                              Thanks, @Darian! I've made changes to the red on the toy, keeping the highest saturation on the creature.

                              I also made other changes to the illustration overall, since I wasn't happy with a lot of it at its base - the toy's legs bothered me, the creature bothered me... lots of things bothered me. XD.

                              Here's an update!:

                              ToyDemon_5.jpg

                              https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                              The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                              • Darian
                                Darian SVS OG @animatosoor last edited by

                                @animatosoor yes! so much better with regards to the saturation! I like the subtle variations on the toy 👍

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                                • animatosoor
                                  animatosoor last edited by

                                  It's Monday (where I am, anyway), and I'm about to call this done. I'd love to receive feedback on this! I've been staring at it for days, and wonder what I'm missing at this stage.

                                  ToyDemon_6.jpg

                                  https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                  The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                  • karolifo
                                    karolifo @animatosoor last edited by

                                    @animatosoor Looks good! The only things I can think of is to refine the shape of the shadow, and consider moving the small toy on the left a little. I feel like it is a bit uncomfortable next to the big dark toy blocks now - it could for example either be partly behind the blocks, or need more space. Or you could add a few more toys 🙂

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                                    • animatosoor
                                      animatosoor last edited by

                                      @karolifo Thank you! I ended up removing the little rattle toy completely, since it didn't sit right at all, no matter where I positioned it. It didn't work in my linework, and so it didn't work in colour either. XD I also went in and refined the shadow shape and did some other subtle fine-tuning. Thank you for helping me along. 🙂

                                      Final:
                                      ToyDemon_7.jpg

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                                      The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                      • animatosoor
                                        animatosoor last edited by

                                        Week 2!

                                        I had these little Sandman Baby drawings sitting in my sketchbook, and it's time to bring them to a finish by hook or by crook.

                                        Sandman_sketches.jpg

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                                        The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                        • marine
                                          marine last edited by

                                          @animatosoor love seeing your process!!
                                          Is there a finished story with the toy demon? Would be such a cool one! 👏 👏 👏

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                                          • animatosoor
                                            animatosoor @marine last edited by

                                            @marine Aw, thank you! 🌼 There isn't a story for that one right now. My mindset when I created those doodles in the past was to simply put some "standalone" idea down in my sketchbook, with no outcome in mind. These days, after discovering SVS, my mindset has shifted quite a bit.

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                                            The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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