Making Narrative pieces- Tortoise and the Hare project
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Here’s what I’ve got so far. I don’t like it. I need your help guys.
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@Nyrryl-Cadiz I think you need to reduce the intensity of the shadows of the vehicles & flatten the detailing of the crowd in the background..its getting a lot of attention. I'd also reduce the opacity of the glass of the vehicles & make them more transparent, the transparency of the glass would differ between the two vehicles because of the space between them & would add depth to the scene. Looking good otherwise.
What do you not like about it ?
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some references for glass:
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Hi, everyone. Sorry I’ve been away for a while. I’ve busy lately. Anyway, i’ve been working on my Tortoise and Hare illustration and this is what I’ve done.
I finally know why I don’t like the second illustration. It was because of the crowd.I’m just not good with crowds. I wish I could just remove them and put some cool space background but I’ve already established my story. I guess you just can’t win them all, can you? Finish not perfect, right?
Anyway, the fourth piece is in the works. I’ll update you guys soon.
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Ha ha this is funny, hare is chilling...love the floating minibar.
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Hi, everyone! I’m finally calling this piece finished. I’m so happy I can take this off my mind. I think I’ll stop here. I don’t think I can finish the 4th illustration. That’s alright though. 3 out of 4 is not bad. I hope you like this one. Thanks!
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@Nyrryl-Cadiz I've only been here a week, so I'm seeing all these for the first time. I just wanted to say that I really like these pieces.
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@Zachary-Drenski hi! Thanks!
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@Nyrryl-Cadiz I almost missed thi final (start) ha ha ha, looking great
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@MichaelaH lol! thanks!