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    July art contest WIP feedback always welcome :)

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    • braden H
      braden H last edited by

      I really like how it was going, but I need some more time to let the whole concept sit and distill a while.

      So I restarted 😃

      Somethin' super simple that I can rattle off by the deadline. Minimal backgrounds, almost all character.

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      • braden H
        braden H last edited by

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        • MichaelaH
          MichaelaH last edited by

          I like the second one, the gips is better to see and his trying to pick it up

          https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
          https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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          • braden H
            braden H @MichaelaH last edited by

            @MichaelaH That's the one I like, too 🙂 The first one's neat but I've been doing WAY too many exaggerated perspective drawings.

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            • rotub
              rotub last edited by

              I like the first ones composition but I didn't notice the broken arms. I saw the broken arms immediately in the second and then went back and saw them in the first.

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              • chrisaakins
                chrisaakins @rotub last edited by

                @Braden-Hallett yeah, what the others said. Maybe even having him walking away from the ball for more heartwrenching drama. Poor kid.

                Chris Akins
                www.chrisakinsart.com
                www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey last edited by

                  Your art is awful you should quit art and give me all your art supplies. ❤

                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                    @Aleksey You got a cintiq now, man! You've got all the supplies I have :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:

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                    • braden H
                      braden H @chrisaakins last edited by

                      @chrisaakins That would've been an awesome idea! Head hung and shoulders drooping.

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                      • braden H
                        braden H @rotub last edited by

                        @rotub Second one it is! 😃

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                        • braden H
                          braden H last edited by

                          Not as many WIP shots, sorry 🙂

                          From here on it's paint over the linework.

                          ![alt text](1976d793-959c-4cc4-b4ce-3e38e17d4296-image.png image url)

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                          • chrisaakins
                            chrisaakins last edited by

                            @Braden-Hallett man you are so good. Even in the simplicity of it it looks like a pro page out of a children's book.

                            Chris Akins
                            www.chrisakinsart.com
                            www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                            • braden H
                              braden H @chrisaakins last edited by

                              @chrisaakins Thanks 😃 that's some pretty high praise 🙂 I'm glad it works with just the characters and not much else.

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                              • Chip Valecek
                                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @chrisaakins last edited by

                                @chrisaakins I think we need to kidnap @Braden-Hallett and do some sort of experiment to figure out where these super powers come from.


                                https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
                                https://www.facebook.com/cvalecek
                                http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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                                • chrisaakins
                                  chrisaakins @Chip Valecek last edited by

                                  @Chip-Valecek @Braden-Hallett or at least watch him work and steal his secrets.

                                  Chris Akins
                                  www.chrisakinsart.com
                                  www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                                  • braden H
                                    braden H @chrisaakins last edited by

                                    @chrisaakins @Chip-Valecek go watch more SVS videos 🙂

                                    Ignore the box labelled 'Braden's art secrets'. It's empty.

                                    Though if anyone's got superpowers it's the kid who managed to get his baseball jersey to fit over those arm casts :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:

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                                    • Chip Valecek
                                      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                                      @Braden-Hallett man I can't believe you don't even know your own characters!!!! Of course he broke both arms sliding into home plate. They rushed him to the hospital and they put the casts on right way. Geez, maybe next time ask him what happened :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat: 😂 🤣 😂


                                      https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
                                      https://www.facebook.com/cvalecek
                                      http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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                                      • braden H
                                        braden H @Chip Valecek last edited by

                                        @Chip-Valecek And that is now the official story 🙂

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