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    • StudioLooong
      StudioLooong last edited by

      Also going to say that I totally agree with @NessIllustration 's thoughts on picking what you love most. I am primarily a graphic designer but decided to remove all the design work from my personal site and social media accounts. I don't want more freelance design work and decided that it was more important to me that my website speak to the work that I want to do than show off work that, while I am proud of it, is not something I want to pursue further outside of my current day job. If I have someone who wants to see my graphic design or if I decide to apply for a new day job I have a page separate from my main site navigation to send them.

      Taylor Woolley
      (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


      Website: www.woolleystories.com
      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/woolleystories/

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      • juliekitzes
        juliekitzes @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

        @Squirrel-Size Thank you very much

        www.JulieKitzes.com
        www.Instagram.com/JulieKitzes

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        • juliekitzes
          juliekitzes @NessIllustration last edited by

          @NessIllustration Hi Vanessa,
          I definitely understand that and it's in the forefront of my mind but I guess my problem is that for the time being I don't really know what I want to be primarily and am still exploring my options. I used to have hidden pages for specific things but found that people would lose the URL and just go to my main page and then see completely different work. I understand the importance of what you're getting at though and think I'm going to try to "find myself" so that I can decide what I want to be known for over the next 6 months and then revamp my site again.
          P.S. I looked at your site and it looks wonderful. I'm also from Canada (Alberta) but live in the states now. 🙂

          www.JulieKitzes.com
          www.Instagram.com/JulieKitzes

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          • juliekitzes
            juliekitzes @StudioLooong last edited by

            @StudioLooong I use Adobe Portfolio. It's a little limiting (I wish so bad I could wrap text around an image) but it's very intuitive and best of all free with an Adobe creative cloud subscription.

            I work as a tattoo artist as well, so both. I followed your suggestion and made the tattoos a category rather than a header. I guess I was afraid of scaring people off with something so different from the traditional art.

            I also set a max width for my logo and changed the tense of my bio. Thank you for these suggestions - I wouldn't have caught them myself.

            www.JulieKitzes.com
            www.Instagram.com/JulieKitzes

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            • StudioLooong
              StudioLooong @juliekitzes last edited by

              @juliekitzes ahh maybe adobe portfolio is powered by webflow... you have all the same wf- tags on your site that I do (which is why I asked)

              Taylor Woolley
              (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


              Website: www.woolleystories.com
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/woolleystories/

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              • juliekitzes
                juliekitzes @Guest last edited by

                @lou Thank you very much. I looked at your website and like your work as well. 🙂

                www.JulieKitzes.com
                www.Instagram.com/JulieKitzes

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                  A Former User @juliekitzes last edited by

                  @juliekitzes Cheers! That's very kind of you! :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes: I'm still working on mine. It needs filling out quite a bit! Whenever I get a spare moment I try to complete another piece for the portfolio :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

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                  • NessIllustration
                    NessIllustration Pro @juliekitzes last edited by

                    @juliekitzes It's definitely not an easy thing to figure out! I wish you good luck in your soul searching, hun!

                    vanessastoilova.com
                    instagram.com/vanessa.stoilova/

                    Check out my Youtube channel for tips on how to start your career in illustration! www.youtube.com/c/ArtBusinesswithNess

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                    • Norman Morana
                      Norman Morana last edited by

                      Hi @juliekitzes! you have some great work on here and it's awesome to see your interests cover a lot of areas of art. I've had to go through and am working through what I'm about to critique. A lot of my first thoughts when seeing your site were summed up perfectly by @NessIllustration, to add a bit of my own thoughts and experiences.

                      Over the past few months I've been going through a major retool of my style, my goals, and my portfolio, and I have to constantly remind myself that in addition to my own enjoyment in making the art, if I want to make a living from this, it has to meet what a client would want. From working with clients and listening to the SVS podcast, clients can be afraid we're going to screw things up. When I look at your portfolio, while there is great work in there, I wouldn't know what I would get from you if I were a client.

                      Some of the categories are much more related, but things like graphic design and the tattoo don't seem to fit as well if you wanted to do fine art or illustration, and vise versa. It's a real struggle to pick a lane. One thing that may work while you're working through this is completely separate websites, then people may not lose the link. Something like Julie Kitzes Illustration, Julie Kitzes Design, or Julie Kitzes Tattoos. I have a website for my illustration work and another for my day job as a production artist in advertisement, and I don't cross these streams.

                      One other suggestion, and this is difficult for basically everyone, you have to look at your work and make sure you're only putting forth your very best. If an image looks out of place and doesn't fit with the rest of your style, this may give a client a red flag. Smaller groups of strong images is better than a ton of work that doesn't all fit together. Thats where a blog can come in! You can share all kinds of stuff there and show other interests and experiments.

                      I hope this can help on some level and doesn't come across too harsh, I say this with the best of intentions. It's really tough out there and sometimes there are sacrifices. Ask yourself a lot of clear questions about what you want.

                      Onwards,

                      Norman

                      normanmoranaillustration.com
                      instagram.com/norman_morana/

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                      • juliekitzes
                        juliekitzes @Norman Morana last edited by

                        @Norman-Morana Thank you for the feedback. I totally get why this might scare a client and will take it into consideration to try to remedy it. 🙂

                        www.JulieKitzes.com
                        www.Instagram.com/JulieKitzes

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