Little Red Sketch
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@mattramsey I agree with your challenge to Sarah on this - as you are just pushing her to really think about the actual request from Tomie in the challenge details. I also agree that Sarah is a fantastic artist which is why I think she can push this so much further as well.
I had just finished reading the full contest details and was coming back here to reply when I saw your response.
I was going to reply with questions to Sarah about this piece based on the challenge such as:
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what makes this version of the main character uniquely yours and unlike other characters we have seen?
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what about this image would make a viewer fall in love with this character?
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I agree with Matt. Your drawing skills are undeniable. What if you had Red reaching up and touching her hood with a look of "oh wow" and grandma reacting with a laugh? Just an idea. @Lee-White in his class on storytelling talks about finding the moment before something is going to happen, during, or after as a basis for the illustration.
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@Sarah-LuAnn This looks like a really interesting challenge! I'm not a member but I might have to have a go at the brief anyway. It is pretty tricky to make anything original with Red Riding Hood. If it was just "Red Riding Hood' then you could push it different ways (eg with her age/story context...I've actually been thinking about doing a Riding Hood piece for @Leontine's winter challenge...!) but since you've got text to follow which specifies her as a little girl, in the normal/expected context, there's not much room to move.
But this is a great drawing, I like grandma's expression
Yeah, the gestures could be changed to make a better connection with the audience...I totally get why Riding Hood is looking down, but I think to make us fall in love with her, some eye contact either with the reader or Grandma, or somehow creating more detail or focus on the face (take advantage of those glasses to make the eyes look bigger?), would help really sell it. -
Yes, doing something new with Little Red Riding Hood is a real challenge. I brainstormed a lot of different ideas--Little Red in different cultures or time periods (asian maybe??) but even though I thought of some unique ideas, I wasn't really excited to draw any of them. In the end, the only thing I was really excited to draw was MY Little Red-- the way I imagine her, with curly dark hair and big glasses. So it may not be the most original new unique idea, but its the one I want to do, which makes it the best one.
I appreciate all the nice comments and encouragement. Its time for an admission--gesture is something I have always, always struggled with, or just a sense of movement in general. My drawings tend to be kind of nice and fairly accurate, but static and stiff. I'm working on it, but it is HARD.
So, here is an updated gesture for Little Red, though I didn't get all the values in--they'll be basically the same as before though. Better, worse? I'm hoping to find a pose/gesture I like so when I see my family next week I can have my niece pose for some reference, so I can get the anatomy and proportions at least a little closer to correct.
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That gesture is better @Sarah-LuAnn - the arm holding the cloak out does help to illustrate her thoughts more
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It is lovely Sarah, and if you don't have time to make changes, this comp will be a good one. But I still feel you can push Red's personality more. I see a very calm and obedient girl in this picture. She just got a new cape! At the very least she would be looking at it. Right now she is looking at her grandmother's wrists (You can't see right under your chin very well...). And she is also being tied around the neck! When I put a tie on my son, he lifts his chin and complains. Would Red complain? Is that her personality? Or is she so excited she can barely hold still? Perhaps if you lift her arm and cape more and have her looking to her right at the beautiful red fabric... Or put a mirror behind the Grandma and have Red up on her toes trying to see herself in the mirror over her Grandma. Look at Disney Cinderella for examples. Here is one I found:
I hope that helps. I know you have time constraints. What you have is lovely and will work so I wouldn't worry if you don't have time now to make changes. Good luck! -
I turned her head and tweaked some other things. Better, worse?
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@Sarah-LuAnn turning the head made big difference in the gesture. I like where you are going with the lighting especially on the basket. The lighting on the face is a bit inconsistent with the rest of the scene. I think only her side plane would receive direct light from the right. Certainly her right eye would be in shadow sine the nose will block it. I love this and can't wait to see the final result. Good luck!
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Oops, I just flipped the face in Photoshop and didn't fix the lighting when I did. I will definitely fix it when I do the final piece.
I'm working on getting more comfortable in Photoshop, so I've been using it to sketch this, so the sketch has that digital paint look. However, I'm going to be completing this in Illustrator because that is what I am comfortable in and I don't want to try a process I'm not confident with for a piece that will be entered in a competition. I think my new years resolution for next year will be to get comfortable in Photoshop, maybe even make a new portfolio section on my website for Photoshop stuff if I feel like I have a good style figured out.
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It's amazing how just turning the head gave Red so much more personality! Much better! Because you turned her face, you may want to consider changing the light source. Keep her face lit but change the lighting on everything else. Just a thought... Can't wait to see it painted!
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Well, I've decided to go forward with the sketch as it is now. Normally for a competition piece I would like to spend a bit more time, but Thanksgiving is getting in the way so I'm just going to work with what I have and do my best in the time that is available to me, which frankly isn't much. Still, I'd rather get something in rather than just say, "Oh well, too bad."
Since I'm going to be traveling and busy, I may not be able to post the rest of my progress here, so I just wanted to come back and thank everyone for their help! I think I really got a good sketch through your suggestions.
Bye until December!
