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    Portfolio pieces WIP- help please

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    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

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      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

        Here’s an update!

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        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

          It’s getting there!

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          • Jorge Valentin
            Jorge Valentin @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

            @Nyrryl-Cadiz Lovely work, love the pastel feel to it.

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            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Jorge Valentin last edited by

              @Jorge-Valentin thank you!

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              • Zachary Drenski
                Zachary Drenski last edited by

                @Nyrryl-Cadiz so far so good.

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Zachary Drenski last edited by

                  @Zachary-Drenski thank you!

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                  • Perrij
                    Perrij last edited by

                    Lookin good! Lookin good. I like that you ended up shrinking the house so that all the tentacles could fit in. I have an image in the works with some tentacle arms too, you'll be my inspiration haha

                    https://perrijs.myportfolio.com/

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                    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Perrij last edited by

                      @Perrij LOL! I’d be honored! Thanks 😅

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                        I did a bit of painting today. It’s not much but i’m satisified I did something today. I’ve been in a slump lately. I’ve been forcing myself to do even just a little art evryday to get myself into my usual rhythm again.
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                        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                          Here’s another update! Almost there. Guess who my kid characters are dressed as.

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                          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                            Almost almost there!

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                            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                              Almost almost almost done!

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                              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                                Done! Any comments? They’re highly appreciated. Thanks!

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                                • MichaelaH
                                  MichaelaH @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by MichaelaH

                                  @Nyrryl-Cadiz Where should be the main point where should I look at first? You had obe version mirrored and I liked it little more to see the action first and the the kid looking for help to the bigger kids standing outside. It is looking wonderful, like 3D like, the tentacles are great work.

                                  https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                  https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @MichaelaH last edited by

                                    @MichaelaH Thanks for the input. I want the main focus to be on the kids. However, given your thoughts, I see that the focus is not standing out that well. That’s why in the new illustrtaion below, I removed the lighting on the teenage characters to decrease their definition, darken their value and shift the attention more to the kids. What do you think? I feel kinda sad not using all that work that went on to the older characters but I’m fine with it too. LOL 😂 I was kinda going for a more graphic look anyways.

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                                    • MichaelaH
                                      MichaelaH @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                                      @Nyrryl-Cadiz I think it is better like this, the teenager are still strong, I am switching with my eyes there, but I think it is ok

                                      https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                      https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @MichaelaH last edited by

                                        @MichaelaH As long as they’re not the first thing you see, I’ll take it! 😅 Thank you so much for the help!

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                                        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                                          The trees ere too vibrant so I lowered their opacity. Any more comments? Critiques?

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