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    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @MichaelaH last edited by

      @MichaelaH oh, swings!!! I know the feeling lol😂 pretty much all vehicles actually

      Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
      YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

        Hi everyone! Here’s an update!

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        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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        • Gary Wilkinson
          Gary Wilkinson last edited by

          Loving it so far, but I wonder if adjusting the angle of the turtle might work a bit better than it's current pose. Also I think it might be worth checking to see if extending the canvas down slightly will help the weight of the scene at the bottom. Good work 🙂

          www.garywilkinsonart.com
          www.instagram.com/gwillustration/
          www.twitter.com/GWillustration

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          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

            @Gary-Wilkinson definitely! I was thinking of extending the canvas too.

            Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
            YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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            • lmrush
              lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

              Nice job!!!!

              Lisa Rush
              www.lisarushgallery.com
              www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
              www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                I’ve been doing more sketches. This one’s from “The Legend of the Mango” a local folklore here in the Philippines. The story tells of a kind girl who has a literal heart of gold which shines whenever she helps others. One day, when a plague of locust devastates her village. She drives them away by using her heart as a beacon, leading the insects away. The girl never returned but one day the barren trees started to bear golden, heart-shaped fruits. At that moment, the girl’s mother knew her daughter finally came home.

                I love that story. Anyway, here they are.

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                Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                  A Former User @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                  @Nyrryl-Cadiz
                  What a wonderful story! I love the way you're framing both spreads with the mangoes and insects! Very lovely work

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                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

                    Hi everyone! Here’s an update.

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                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                      A Former User last edited by

                      Beautiful! You did a great job capturing that heartfelt moment!

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Guest last edited by

                        @Alicja-W thanks! That means a lot.

                        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                        • Gary Wilkinson
                          Gary Wilkinson @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                          @Nyrryl-Cadiz beautiful painting. Great composition, color and story can't really say much else apart from that 🙂

                          www.garywilkinsonart.com
                          www.instagram.com/gwillustration/
                          www.twitter.com/GWillustration

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                          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                            @Gary-Wilkinson thanks!

                            Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                            YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                            • MichaelaH
                              MichaelaH @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                              @Nyrryl-Cadiz Looks so nice, lovely with the light, nice colors

                              https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                              https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @MichaelaH last edited by

                                @MichaelaH thank you!

                                Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                                  Hi, everyone! I’ve been working on new pieces. Here are some rough sketches.

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                                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                  YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                                    Here’s an update. I want to finish the line work tonight.

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                                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                    • Kuarahy
                                      Kuarahy @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                                      @Nyrryl-Cadiz I absolutely love this!

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                                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                                        @Kuarahy Thanks. This one is of the folklore Ibong Adarna( The Adarna Bird) which is about this bird which can cure all sickness through its song. It’s hard to catch though because if you hear its song it can also send you into a deep slumber and if its droppings fall on you, you’ll turn into stone.

                                        Here’s another update everyone!3E25618D-FC8A-4C33-A83F-A6B8669148E9.jpeg

                                        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                        • RobinCampbellArt
                                          RobinCampbellArt @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                                          Hi- @Nyrryl-Cadiz
                                          From the original Mango Legend sketch, you moved into painting your work well...the ghost girl is perfect. I like this image a lot. I just went through a portfolio workshop and the faculty that gave feed back asked us to think about showing characters in series, usually three. I saw a second sketch of your character in a field. Ideally there should be a third. I hope you post a third series sketch for the Legend of the Mango set.

                                          I’m also wondering if the aim for your portfolio is for getting picture book work, if so you should be thinking about open areas where potential text could go in all your images.

                                          I love your painting style....are you working digitally? If so what kind of brushes are you using.

                                          Looking forward to seeing more of your stuff. Love it 🙂

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                                          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                                            Here’s another update!

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                                            Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                            YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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