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    • eroomba
      eroomba last edited by

      As already mentioned above, great concept!

      This is going to be a really creepy comment but I feel like you should have some indication of knees to indicate it was his feet that were removed. Again, I know it's creepy but it seems way more depressing that so much of his legs were removed.

      Also, sorry to heap stuff on, but with the background the way it is with he building so far in the background it looks like it's a city street way outside the city. That may have been intentional, though.

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      • TessaW
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        Looking good. I approve of your wife's addition. One more comment- I'd think about putting a few more flyers on the pole. Right now it has just one and I think it distracts from the impact of your intended message. It's great to set the ambiance of the scene, but my mind keeps wanting to connect the dots between what the lost flyer means in relation to the bunny. I think if you added a couple more, it would make them feel more like a setting element rather than a narrative element. Hope that makes sense!

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        • Aaron_T
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          Lol @eroomba! I get what you’re saying...this is a concept I like but I can’t help but feel badly for bunny, especially every time I have to talk about it.
          @TessaW i hear you about the pole too...I lost some of the height when I cropped the space and I was having trouble with the idea that people were going to put stickers and flyers down at ground level. Food for thought though.

          Been playing with the idea of getting rid of the street corner altogether...not sure if it’s because I’m wimping out on that middle ground or if it makes it better to just toss bunn in an alley. Flyers, grunge and other alley-esque trash will be added eventually, but could this be a solution?
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          • sigross
            sigross @Aaron_T last edited by

            @Aaron_T Dunno man. Realistically, rabbits would beg where they get footfall. Money bunnies would avoid hare bare alley ways. Unless it's outside a bunny hop club.

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            • Aaron_T
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              @sigross 🤣

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              • Aaron_T
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                I was showing a coworker the progression of these images and she asked why the bandages were where I had them. I explained that his feet were taken as good luck charms, to which she replied "it's not rabbit's feet that are lucky, it's the tail." 😶

                After several pages of gross google searches trying to prove that no, it is in fact, rabbits feet that are lucky, another coworker came by and asked what the discussion was about. Bringing him up to speed, he said "No, I had a friend in school that had a lucky rabbit's tail keychain, and have seen them in Mexico too."

                This got me thinking...maybe this is a cultural or location thing. Since this forum has people all over the world on it I'm curious, is the basic premise of this confusing?

                For what its worth, today's rabbit trails (pun intended) weren't a total loss – I learned something. They suspect that the idea of a lucky rabbits foot got its origin from "The Hand of Glory"...a European superstition that if you cut off the left hand of a hanged man, pickle it, then turn it into a candle it will bring you good luck. Which, gross as it sounds, would have been the much faster visual for this challenge.

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                • Chip Valecek
                  Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Aaron_T last edited by

                  @Aaron_T here in Chicago its a rabbits foot. I had the keychain when I was a kid.


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                  • sigross
                    sigross @Aaron_T last edited by

                    @Aaron_T well I heard from my Irish friends that it's the left hind foot that's lucky. It's very lucky if the rabbit is killed in a grave yard.

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                    • Aaron_T
                      Aaron_T @sigross last edited by

                      @sigross Well, of course it is! 😉

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                      • TessaW
                        TessaW last edited by

                        In Hawaii, it's a foot. Seems like even when you google "lucky rabbit's tail", images of rabbit's feet still pop up for the images.

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