Slowvember progress.

[braden H]

@KathrynAdebayo Thanks I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm havin' a good time with this so far.

That cluster of similar values and tangents in the fence/wing/hill area is definitely going to be a point of concern! But I think I've got an idea of how to solve it

Thanks for the feedback!

[braden H]

@Neha-Rawat Thanks! I hadn't noticed the implied tangent with the rabbit chin shadow. It's totally where that fence would be running behind it.

Thanks for the feedback I love the nitty gritty stuff. It always gives me something to think about for next time (There's some stuff I ain't fixin at this stage, lol :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat: )

[braden H]

@LauraA Iiiiiiiinteresting! There may be a way I can subtly lower the fence just a wee bit.

Thanks for the feedback

[braden H]

Work continues...

[ZeeZeeMonster]

@Braden-Hallett I like how you lowered the fence. It looks great and now the wings don't look like they're brushing up against it.

[LauraA]

@Braden-Hallett Bravo! Now it looks like the hawk calculated just right.

[theprairiefox]

@Braden-Hallett I just had a thought as I was looking at this. I was thinking about where everyone is looking and they are leading you off the page (except the rabbit who is helping to bring you back in.) And I think the movement is ok, but in a book you usually want the reader to be moving off the page to right?

When you are done, you might want to consider flipping the image?

I think it kind of feels better...

[braden H]

@theprairiefox I'll absolutely consider it! Though I'm fine with the hawk reading first I'll keep it in the back of my mind as I carry on

[braden H]

Work continues! I get to do a bit more work messing up the lines on the mouse and the hawk, and then spoon some colour around, but done very soon!

[braden H]

I'm tentatively calling this one done. If anyone can think of any tweaks or small changes to be made at this point it would be much appreciated