After the storm
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@Kevin-Longueil Thank you, that is a very good suggestion. The original was only half page but I decided to extend the whole page and realized something is weird about the rock haha. it was like this. Thanks again.
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here the change!
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This looks good - each page reads well as its own composition and the spread reads well as a composition too - i don't think this is necessary but i think it is a bit of a home run when you make it happen - the text will add visual weight to the right side of the composition too as you said - i like how you changed the birds to have them looking in different directions with only a few having discovered the flying fish - really looks nice!
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thank you so much I really like the change as well. -
looks good Naroth. The change really helped. I like the watercolour look and the cloud looks nice.
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I think the change looks great! Excellent watercolor
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This is very sweet!Everything stands out really well , even in all blue tones!
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I like the change and your color choice is great. Nice!!
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@Naroth-Kean if this is a sunny day you can push that idea more by adding more contrast to the fish in the foreground. Most likely, the tops of the fish would be in full light and should be the lightest value in the image. Add some cast shadows from the wings/fins and wrap the shadows around the bod to show form. These fish would be very shiny and will have very defined specular highlights.
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@Lee-Holland @Dan-Tavis @Bharris @Rob-Smith Thank you guys I really appreciate it!
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@Naroth-Kean beautiful! Flying fishes are so funny! I love the colors, and the composition is very good. Good Job Naroth!
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Very nice!
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@Leontine @Lee-White
Thanks a lot guys! much appreciate.
