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    3rd Thursday Naughty Children FINAL

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    • Rob Smith
      Rob Smith last edited by

      @bharris I think you have a funny idea there!

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      • Leontine
        Leontine @bharris last edited by

        @bharris COOOOL! I like this idea! hopefully it will work, cause they all might wanna go their own way! LOL. The variety of characters are very nice!

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        • bharris
          bharris last edited by

          I'm re-working the composition to give it better emphasis and overlapping. This one feels too flat when I looked at it this morning.

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          • MOO
            MOO SVS OG last edited by

            Great idea and love the preliminary sketch idea!

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            • Naroth Kean
              Naroth Kean last edited by

              haha, you know what I like the idea. Naughty or bullies need to get to work XD. I like the composition and each of their interaction with the story.

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              • smoke
                smoke last edited by

                concept is already great! 🙂 cant wait to see the finished piece!! 🙂

                smoke

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                • bharris
                  bharris last edited by

                  Here is a different concept, doesn't feel as flat to me, but my husband liked the first better. What do you guys think?

                  naughty children sketch 2.PNG

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                  • Chip Valecek
                    Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                    I prefer the second one. Looks like the children are more staggered. Some in the foreground, some in the mid and some in back. Hence not the flat of all in a line. Is the one child in back of Santa sticking is tongue out? If so I like it.


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                    • Lee White
                      Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      Second one for sure! Really nice!

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                      • Thrace
                        Thrace @bharris last edited by

                        @bharris The second one definitely!! What a wonderful image, I can't wait to see it finished!!

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                        • bharris
                          bharris last edited by

                          Thanks everyone!

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                          • Naroth Kean
                            Naroth Kean last edited by

                            like the second one for the obvious reason :D. Good job!

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                            • bharris
                              bharris last edited by

                              Still behind, but the line work is done! 🙂

                              naughty children sketch 2.PNG

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                              • Thrace
                                Thrace @bharris last edited by

                                @bharris So nice!! Get painting!!

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                                • Chip Valecek
                                  Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                                  Looks great! Can't wait to see it painted.


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                                  • Dulcie
                                    Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                                    @bharris Oh, this is so beautifully drawn and I'm sure it is going to be amazing!! Great work! 🙂 I am really looking forward to seeing the coloured version now.

                                    The one thing I think...maybe it's too late to change....but I would just love to see some of those kids with little reindeer antler headbands! It would be so cute and IMO would help the storytelling part, that the kids are meant to be reindeer (and not just kids messing around in the snow).

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                                    • shinjifujioka
                                      shinjifujioka SVS OG last edited by

                                      Very lively image!

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                                      • kai satoshi
                                        kai satoshi last edited by

                                        Very nice line work. Mine is never this clean.

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                                        • Joy Heyer
                                          Joy Heyer last edited by

                                          The details in the line work is beautiful! I can't to wait to see color added!

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                                          • bharris
                                            bharris last edited by

                                            @Dulcie Thank you so much! I love that idea and I can see a few of the kids that would be excellent targets for antlers, also it'll add another holiday detail. 🙂

                                            @Kris-Knight I'm a little OC with the lines... I tried so hard not to zoom in to clean them up perfectly, it can be a time waster!

                                            @Joy-Heyer @shinjifujioka @Chip-Valecek @Thrace-Shirley-Mears Thank you so much everyone! I''ll post updates soon!

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