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    • Mandy Forte
      Mandy Forte last edited by

      Ok, so here is my progress so far. I am tying to test my shading before I add color. What are some thoughts on it? please and Thank you. Svs_jan_2020 2.jpg

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      • Braxton
        Braxton last edited by

        I like where it’s going so far! Question about the tracks: they look close enough to something normal that I’m not sure if I’m supposed to know what they are or not? Maybe you could push their weirdness factor?

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        • Mandy Forte
          Mandy Forte @Braxton last edited by

          @Braxton that is a good point. Thank you.

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          • Mandy Forte
            Mandy Forte last edited by

            my progress. Svs_jan_2020 3.jpg

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            • Braxton
              Braxton last edited by

              Looking good! Maybe the tracks could be pushed even farther, like adding 5 toes? Idk maybe then they wouldn’t even read as tracks? One other thing, you might try darkening the background a bit to push the contrast between the foreground and background. The little boy’s silhouette popped more in the black and white drawing, but it’s a little less evident in the latest version.

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              • Jenna Jenks
                Jenna Jenks @Mandy Forte last edited by

                @Mandy-Forte the colors are very cheerful ❤️😊

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                • KaraDaniel
                  KaraDaniel @Mandy Forte last edited by

                  @Mandy-Forte cute! For some reason my eyes keep getting drawn to the brown bunny with the pointy ears...they sort of point me to the upper left and it is also the only animal where we don't see the face and the thought distracted me from what was going on to the right. Looking forward to seeing your progress!

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