Feedbacks on composition needed, Thank U!

[idid]

Quick question, for composition only, which one do you think is better? For the better one, any suggestions for further improvement? Hope this illustration is self-explaining in terms of the story behind.

Thank you!

[carlianne]

@idid

I prefer the second one! It was easier for me to understand the house and tree in that one

I think it looks like rain is coming from the beard off a man or a god? I love the concept! My only thought of things you could try would be to make the god look more special? He looks like a regular guy so maybe his clothes? Or maybe more storytelling? Like it's raining on a ship in a storm?

Or something else that tells us more about your story. I really do love the theme though! Really fun image

[idid]

@carlianne Ah, Thank you for the suggestion! Yep, I totally agree that the guy's outfit is a bit too normal gonna make it special!

[xin li]

I really like the color comp. I also prefer #2.
I agree with @carlianne that placing the scene on ocean with a small ship will be more interesting. The steak and tension will be so much higher.