April Contest Cat Bot WIP
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Cool concept! I like how well you designed the kitchen; keeping the focus on the characters, while making it look like most of the kitchen's I've been in: busy
I noticed that the box for the Catbot just has the tagline for the product on it, and with most products having the product name in a prominent place on the packaging, maybe it would be good to add a name on there (Whiskers 3000, Catinator 251…etc) either above the tagline or in place of it. I mean, the image reads well enough that I could tell that the Catbot is supposed to get rid of the mice, so the tagline could even go away all together if you wanted.
Looking forward to seeing where you go with the final colour!
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@JoshSchouwstra yeah I thought about that. But the cartoonist in me couldn’t resist. I’ll try it though because maybe it will be better than a tag line. I can practice my typography a bit
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@ArtofAleksey great concept. Love seeing your progress.
I echo @StudioLooong regarding value. I think value is especially important with busy scene such as the one you are designing. Keep in mind a simple quesiton may help "is it a dark shape on a light background, or light shape on a dark background?" I would group all background in the same value zone, and simplify the rendering if I can. You could try to use more or less line work for the bakcground, and have a bit more rendering and details going on for the forground characters. -
@xin-li yeah that’s what i was thinking gonna try and see if I can make that happen, thank you.
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Ok im taking a little break now. Im having trouble tying the background with the foreground and I think that’s because none of the background colors are in the foreground and vise versa. I gotta figure that out, or repaint the background? I gotta push the values a bit more too they are too close.
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@ArtofAleksey I like that you lightened the background, I agree that the values were too close in the previous one. I think because of the line work and how you laid things out even though the girls face and the background are similar colors she is still easy to read- but you could push her face a little further darker or lighter to maker her pop even more. This is hilarious- I love the work you have done on it and seeing your process.
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@Annaaronson thanks Anna. Yeah the face was a concern but she does still pop. Maybe ill tweek it a tad more
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That's so cute, I know it's going to turn out awesome.
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Ok i added little grease stains on the little girl and reversed the gradient and made it a bit moe saturated at the top. I like this
