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    • shirousagi
      shirousagi last edited by shirousagi

      Hello everyone

      I was just hoping to ask for feedback on my perspective assignment.

      It is far from finished, but I think I need some advice.
      I have only been drawing for a few weeks now so please do excuse my errors, but by all means do not be afraid to comment on them.

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      I can see that my curtains are off, but I am not quite sure how to fix them.
      (I did not spend much time on them, as I thought I´d ask how to get them right first)
      I would also like to add more details, like pattern to the carpet or a pinstripe wallpaper, however I am not sure how to get the proportions right.

      Thank you for any feedback and tips xx
      Stay safe and take care,
      𝓂.𝓂.

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      • Frost Drive
        Frost Drive last edited by

        @shirousagi said in Perspective Assignment:

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        That's some really good perspective for only a few weeks into drawing!! WOW

        I think with the curtains you just gotta really completely think of the form as you draw. Know exactly what each lines means

        My Drawing Show: https://www.youtube.com/ArtParlor
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/frostdrive/

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        • shirousagi
          shirousagi @Frost Drive last edited by

          @Frost-Drive Thanks a lot for the feedback and tip!! xx

          I just visited your instagram and your work is stunning ・:*˚✧₊⁎

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          • shirousagi
            shirousagi last edited by

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            I added a few more details and had another go on the curtains, however I cannot seem to get quite happy with them.

            Also, I do struggle with my ellipses - is practice all it takes or does anyone have a good advice?

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            • Frost Drive
              Frost Drive @shirousagi last edited by

              @shirousagi With ellipses, I would suggest the ellipse homework assignments from drawabox.com
              It made me better at them in just a day.
              The biggest thing though is to draw from your shoulder. It hurts at first, but it's worth struggling to get good at.

              And thanks for checking out my instagram too!! ^_^

              My Drawing Show: https://www.youtube.com/ArtParlor
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/frostdrive/

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              • shirousagi
                shirousagi @Frost Drive last edited by

                @Frost-Drive Thank you so much, I´ve checked out the assignments and I too can see improvements already ^^

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