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    Sketching gnome lady ...please comment

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    • Rowan Ferguson
      Rowan Ferguson @Leontine last edited by

      @Leontine-Gaasenbeek Looks great Leontine. The only slight confusion I have is her left arm where the material folds. I like how she's a little stout, it adds charm to her character. Please post the final version if you ink and colour.

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      • Leontine
        Leontine @Rowan Ferguson last edited by

        @Rowan-Ferguson thanks Rowan, ill take a look at that arm.

        Leontine
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          Amanda Jean last edited by

          Cute, but this has so much more potential. I'd love to see a little more connection between her and the snail, and a bit more life in it. Perhaps try giving the snail the same characteristics you would see in a dog going for a walk? Excited, stupidly happy and moving all over.

          Hope you don't mind, I did a quick little draw over to show you what I mean.
          leontinesnaile.jpg

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          • Leontine
            Leontine @Amanda Jean last edited by

            @Amanda-Jean Thanks Amanda! ill use that in the next sketch!

            Leontine
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            • Leontine
              Leontine last edited by

              gnome lady 2 leontine gaasenbeek.jpg Here 's a new version. sketching is so much fun! Its a nice to make some more wile having vacation next week. Please upvote if you like it!

              Leontine
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              • Steve Young
                Steve Young last edited by

                I love this piece, only thing I would do is make the worms head a little smaller.

                Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                • Leontine
                  Leontine @Guest last edited by

                  @Dado-Almeida Thanx Dado! Ill take your advice and start the perspective class. Printed out the workbook already! Like your sketching and progress during the process. Ill work on this for a bit more aswell! Thanks again!

                  Leontine
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                  • Leontine
                    Leontine @Guest last edited by

                    @Dado-Almeida thanx!

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                    • Maile McCarthy
                      Maile McCarthy @Leontine last edited by

                      @Leontine-Gaasenbeek I really like your costume design on the character. I understand why you gave her shoes in the redo, since they're going out for a walk, but I really liked her socks in the initial post. I hope you can use them in another drawing! Love the little touch of the acorn as the dog/slug's ball. Can't wait to see where you take this.

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                      • Leontine
                        Leontine @Maile McCarthy last edited by

                        @Maile-McCarthy Thank you, As soon as I return from vacation, next week, ill start working on it again. I want to work on a background as well. not sure what to choose, a nice gnomehouse, treehouse, or a more simple background.

                        Leontine
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                        • Maile McCarthy
                          Maile McCarthy @Leontine last edited by

                          @Leontine-Gaasenbeek I look forward to seeing what you come up with for the background. I keep thinking of the woods where I practice archery. We see tons of slugs there, and I could so easily imagine these characters popping out for a walk among the leaves.

                          Hope you have a pleasant vacation 🙂

                          Maile

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                          • Leontine
                            Leontine last edited by

                            kabouter leontine gaasenbeek.jpg Started with a background, which is not my speciality. Before I start painting comments again are welcome!

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                            • Steve Young
                              Steve Young last edited by

                              Much beter, the only odd thing I can see, is the gnome lady feet look squashed. Great work!

                              Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                              • Leontine
                                Leontine @Steve Young last edited by

                                @Steve-Young Thanks Steve! I've changed the feet a bit, next is coloring!

                                Leontine
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                                • Steve Young
                                  Steve Young last edited by

                                  Cant wait to see it!

                                  Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                                  • Leontine
                                    Leontine last edited by

                                     leontine gaasenbeek walking the snail def.jpg
                                    And the final piece. Very happy with it. Up to the next one!

                                    Leontine
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