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    • NessIllustration
      NessIllustration Pro @Pamela Fraley last edited by

      @Pamela-Fraley I like D, it's a very striking composition!

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      • cristamay
        cristamay last edited by cristamay

        I like the D too! (but it might be because I'm always driven to these kind of compos) However I would suggest that if the main point is the enviroment why not try to frame it a bit further in the distance so the characters are only tiny spots (so you can tell where they are) but the main picture is the landscape so you can play more with textures and layers on it.
        Also I think the light on this could be so beautiful.

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        • Quackamos
          Quackamos last edited by

          I have to agree, D is the best one in my opinion! The low angle with all the plants and grass with the characters has a really nice calming feeling, like walking home right after a sunset; I can almost hear the crickets! 🙂

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          • chrisaakins
            chrisaakins last edited by

            D looks good because it highlights the two most important features your characters and the garden area.

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            • Laurel Aylesworth
              Laurel Aylesworth @Pamela Fraley last edited by

              @Pamela-Fraley Definitely D. The silhouettes are striking and you have a neat opportunity to make those plants look really wild. I also like this one because you will be able to see the character's expressions.

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              • ajillustrates
                ajillustrates @Pamela Fraley last edited by

                @Pamela-Fraley My vote is for D for the reasons already listed in previous comments, but it's also the only composition where the characters are moving forward, rather than receding. That, combinded with the low angle shot, empowers the image.

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                • Pamela Fraley
                  Pamela Fraley SVS OG @NessIllustration last edited by

                  @NessIllustration said in Composition help...:

                  @Pamela-Fraley I like D, it's a very striking composition!
                  Thanks for your help. It was unanimous too. I’ll play around with that one then. ☺️

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                  • Pamela Fraley
                    Pamela Fraley SVS OG @cristamay last edited by Pamela Fraley

                    @cristamay @ajillustrates @Laurel-Aylesworth @Quackamos @chrisaakins Thanks everyone!! It’s easy since everyone agreed. I wasn’t expecting that. ☺️. I’m still going to draw up some portrait style thumbnails, just to see. I’ll update this thread.

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                    • Frost Drive
                      Frost Drive last edited by

                      What I noticed with D is that one of the kids is right in the middle of the picture. D is the best one, but I would move them slightly to avoid middleness

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                      • Neha Rawat
                        Neha Rawat last edited by Neha Rawat

                        I like B and D.
                        It depends on what you want to highlight. D is definitely great but I think it's not highlighting the contrast of the trimmed vs wild (which is more prominent in B )

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