July contest - any feedback please?

[silvialcg]

Thanks, everyone! Great feedback! I’ve made a few changes, hopefully better now. I’ll give the purple saturation advice a try later, and maybe move the scarecrow, but that may be hard! Running out of time

[JoshSchouwstra]

Cool textures and character designs!

Though I have two critiques on your characters. The first critique is that Toto should be darker if not black, since he is described as black in the book, and he gets lost in the yellow of the road when white.
The second is the scarecrow's hat gets lost in the road with it being yellow on yellow. Matching the hat to the body might work, but contrast is needed to define where the hat is.

So great job on the overall piece, but there are a few things that I think could be adjusted. All the best in the contest!

[silvialcg]

Thanks! Great tips. I didn't remember Toto was black! Oops! I was thinking of changing the hat to a more orange or green too... I think I'll give it a go

[silvialcg]

Ok, this is it! My last two versions, with black Toto and an orange hat for the scarecrow... one with reduced saturation... now the question is... which one is better? Thank you everyone for your help!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@silvialcg hi! With your permission would you let me do a paint over of your work?

[silvialcg]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz You mean to show us here? Sure. Curious to see what you’re doing lol

[silvialcg]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz by the way, is Cadiz your last name? That’s the name of my province

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@silvialcg yeah it’s my surname. I’m Filipino and we were under Spanish rule for 330 years since the 1500s to the 1900s. They gave us all spanish surnames like Gonzales, Garcia, dela Cruz, and sometimes Cadiz.

[silvialcg]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz Hmmm... in the name of my ancestors: sorry...

[silvialcg]

@gavpartridge Thanks for your feedback. Yes, I've been playing with the saturation of the purple flowers and I may bring it down more to emphasise the characters. My problem with that was that I really liked the bright, playful colours of the background. I'm trying to create a world that is closer to a dream than reality. Any other way I could increase the contrast without sacrificing the colours?

[silvialcg]

@gavpartridge I'm thinking I could add extra flowers and make these a light colour to contrast with the lion... Not sure what I could change on the path to emphasise the scarecrow and Dorothy...

[silvialcg]

@gavpartridge Thank you so much! Very helpful feedback. Let's see how much I can apply before the deadline!

[silvialcg]

Well, ran out of time, but I tried to apply as much of your feedback as possible. Thank you so much! Definitely an improvement.