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    Santa Hot Air Balloon DEC 3rd Thursday FINAL

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    • Rob Smith
      Rob Smith last edited by Rob Smith

      @Charlie-Eve-Ryan What if you changed the viewing angle of Santa and the balloon slightly so there is more of a foreshortened look, ie the balloon is farther away from the camera than Santa therefor allowing the viewer to see more of the balloon. I like the bottom image you came up with as well. Just some thoughts.

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      • Charlie Eve Ryan
        Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by Charlie Eve Ryan

        Thanks @Thrace-Shirley-Mears and @Rob-Smith 😃

        @Rob-Smith: I'll definitely play with the angle too and see how it reads!

        @Thrace-Shirley-Mears My parents would love the xmas card. Thx

        Happy Creating
        www.charlieeveryan.com

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        • Chris Perry
          Chris Perry last edited by

          Like the textures in your style.

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          • Charlie Eve Ryan
            Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG @Chris Perry last edited by

            @Chris-Perry Hey thanks 😃

            I've been trying different compositions, but I still think I like the Mrs. Clause and Balloon one the best so I may start painting it and see where it goes.

            Happy Creating
            www.charlieeveryan.com

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            • Chris Perry
              Chris Perry last edited by

              Good luck. You are off to a great start.

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              • Charlie Eve Ryan
                Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                Here is my final piece submitted this am.

                charlieeveryansmall.jpg

                Happy Creating
                www.charlieeveryan.com

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                • bharris
                  bharris last edited by

                  @Charlie-Eve-Ryan I really like this! You got the layout done well and the texture and color scheme is really wonderful!

                  www.brittanyharrisillustration.com/
                  www.instagram.com/britillustration/

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                  • Rich Green
                    Rich Green SVS OG @Charlie Eve Ryan last edited by

                    @Charlie-Eve-Ryan - I really like the way you did the layout and included both the making of the balloon and then Santa using it to make his deliveries. It's wonderful!

                    www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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                    • Charlie Eve Ryan
                      Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG @bharris last edited by

                      @bharris and @rich-green Thanks so much, it was a fun one to work on. I went thru quite a few layouts before I landed back on this one because I felt it added more to the story overall.

                      Happy Creating
                      www.charlieeveryan.com

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                      • Stephanie Hider
                        Stephanie Hider last edited by

                        I have really enjoyed all of the work this month from everyone but this is my favorite piece. It reminds me of my mother I think, so that is probably why. Love your style!

                        http://stephisdoodling.com
                        http://stephaniehider.com
                        https://www.instagram.com/stephhider/

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                        • Charlie Eve Ryan
                          Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG @Stephanie Hider last edited by

                          @Stephanie-Hider Thanks so much, tonight's crit session was great. So much amazing concepts and ideas.

                          Happy Creating
                          www.charlieeveryan.com

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