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    • Julia
      Julia @Chris Philpot last edited by

      @Chris-Philpot you should try to make variation from nbr 2. The idea is new and the concept seducing. Not sure if it should be an old man (but why not? Maybe fairies age like humans!). Maybe the swip could be on a more elaborated environmemt? Maybe other fairies (not necessarely ink fairies) could be around too and busy with their own tasks? Anyway... I feel there is more to explore there!

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      • Chris Philpot
        Chris Philpot last edited by

        Two more thumbs:

        InkFairy_ChrisPhilpot_5.png InkFairy_ChrisPhilpot_4.png

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        • Chris Philpot
          Chris Philpot @Julia last edited by

          @Julia Thank you! Yeah, the ink fairly as a janitor is my favorite so far. I like your idea about other fairies for context. Maybe he's underappreciated fairy society.

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          • Chris Philpot
            Chris Philpot last edited by

            Maybe she's blowing an ink bubble to thwart the photo...
            InkFairy_ChrisPhilpot_6.png

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            • chrisaakins
              chrisaakins @Chris Philpot last edited by chrisaakins

              @Chris-Philpot haha we had the same idea. I just posted mine on the contest page. Those vindictive little fairies.

              I thought of a squid too. We must have the same sick sense of humor.

              Chris Akins
              www.chrisakinsart.com
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              • Chris Philpot
                Chris Philpot @chrisaakins last edited by

                @chrisaakins You beat me to that one! Great job on the execution. Love the posters and character design! Nice work.

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                • chrisaakins
                  chrisaakins @Chris Philpot last edited by

                  @Chris-Philpot Thanks! It means a lot!

                  Chris Akins
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                  www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                  • Chris Philpot
                    Chris Philpot @chrisaakins last edited by

                    @chrisaakins Ha! Yeah, someone is going to do great things with the squid ink. That direction is hard to pass up. Tentacles are too fun to draw!

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                    • kimmypie
                      kimmypie last edited by

                      I really like the janitor lol.

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                      • JoshuaDages
                        JoshuaDages last edited by

                        I, too, like the janitor idea. I think it is a really fun concept and really original!

                        I love the newsboy cap on the thumbnail lower down as well. Maybe the janitor was a "newsboy fairy" in the 20's and has kept the hat all these years, haha.

                        Looking forward to seeing what you come up with!

                        Joshua Dages
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                        • Chris Philpot
                          Chris Philpot last edited by

                          Janitor seems to have potential so I dashed off a couple of early revisions.

                          Why is he cleaning up ink? Maybe he's like the tooth fairy and collects it?

                          Why does Ellie think today is the day to get a photo? Maybe she dumped it out to attract him?

                          Julia's idea of other fairies made me think of naughty/punk fairies from his fairy world. Maybe they vandalize Ellie's art table for him and the janitor has to clean up after them?

                          Or maybe Ellie's cat is always making a mess and attracting the ink fairy?

                          Trying to settle on a coherent idea that will read correctly in a single image. Probably be in this revision stage for a few days. These still feel like a bit of a stretch concept-wise.

                          JanitorRevise1.png JanitorRevise2.jpg

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                          • Chris Philpot
                            Chris Philpot @JoshuaDages last edited by

                            @JoshuaDages Thanks! I'm adding a janitor hat at least. Will play around with the details of his costume.

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                            • Chris Philpot
                              Chris Philpot @kimmypie last edited by

                              @kimmypie Thanks! Great work on your dragonfly by the way. So fun.

                              https://www.instagram.com/chrisphilpotpicturebooks/
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                              • kimmypie
                                kimmypie @Chris Philpot last edited by

                                @Chris-Philpot thanks so much. I’m just getting started with illustration. I’m coming from an oil painting background so it’s really tough to shift gears. I think illustration is much harder than fine arts. Designing characters is so hard.

                                I love the janitor with no hat.

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                                • Chris Philpot
                                  Chris Philpot @kimmypie last edited by

                                  @kimmypie Yeah, I know what you mean. My comfort zone is editorial illustration so it's humbling learning all the basics again in this world. At least we know it gets easier.

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                                  • Elliot
                                    Elliot @Chris Philpot last edited by

                                    @Chris-Philpot I like both of these but I think the cat concept has more of an obvious tie in with the prompt. Love the poor little janitor 😆

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                                    • Chris Philpot
                                      Chris Philpot last edited by Chris Philpot

                                      New study with some line work and values. Testing having Ellie in the background.

                                      FairyStudy_ChrisPhilpot2.jpg

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                                      • Anna Lindsay
                                        Anna Lindsay @Chris Philpot last edited by

                                        @Chris-Philpot I love this concept! The way you’ve drawn the characters is so great 😄

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                                        • Chris Philpot
                                          Chris Philpot @Anna Lindsay last edited by

                                          @Annabishop Thanks so much!

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                                          • Elliot
                                            Elliot @Chris Philpot last edited by

                                            @Chris-Philpot This version really brings it all together to fully fit the prompt. Love that he's trying to mark out her declaration lol!

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