October contest WIP

[braden H]

Lineart!

[miranda-hoover]

@Braden-Hallett This is turning out really cool! I love the direction you took the prompt.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Braden-Hallett looking really good! Tho that hand near the 2 kids is slightly bothering me because I can’t see the body. This is just purely my opinion tho. Feel free to disregard.

[Heather Boyd]

@Braden-Hallett Certainly out of the box idea, keep making really appealing stories !

[braden H]

@Heather-Boyd @miranda-hoover thanks guys I think it's a little grim compared to the other entries, but I like it

[braden H]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz said in October contest WIP:

@Braden-Hallett looking really good! Tho that hand near the 2 kids is slightly bothering me because I can’t see the body. This is just purely my opinion tho. Feel free to disregard.

That hand's been buggin' me too. I think I'm fine with its owner being out of frame, but there's DEFINITELY something about it that's off. I think it'll be better entirely without. I may replace it with some of the 'feast's' pirate costume accoutrement (like a scimitar pointing at the girls under the table).

Thanks for the feedback! I was on the edge and you gave me a nice nudge

[miranda-hoover]

@Braden-Hallett Tis the season

[K.Flagg]

Love this idea! I can't wait to see it finished.

[chrisaakins]

@Braden-Hallett compared to Penny being a murderer, I’d say this is pretty tame.

[djlambson]

@Braden-Hallett I really like your way of putting things together.. Background done first then line art. I might try this next time!

[braden H]

@chrisaakins said in October contest WIP:

@Braden-Hallett compared to Penny being a murderer, I’d say this is pretty tame.

I'd completely forgotten about that You're right, though. Compared to a disembodied head sitting on a gravestone this IS tame.

[braden H]

@djlambson said in October contest WIP:

@Braden-Hallett I really like your way of putting things together.. Background done first then line art. I might try this next time!

It's workin' out pretty well! certainly works for me

[braden H]

Slowly workin' away! We'll see if I finish on time. Paid work takes precedence

[K.Flagg]

It's looking awesome

[braden H]

Work progressssses

[braden H]

Callin' it done!