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    • amberwingart
      amberwingart last edited by

      Good point, @pixby - I hadn't processed that macabre may have been his intention! I agree with the perspective and drawing skills being awesome - great job!

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      • Naters.Art
        Naters.Art last edited by

        yeah, i didn't have one of the layers on...this is the expression i was going for.
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        • Lynn Larson
          Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

          My immediate response was "that's terrifying" while laughing! the last expression nails it! I'm torn on the cat, i love his face in the first one, and the second one leaves it up to your imagination a bit lol

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          • Bobby Aquitania
            Bobby Aquitania last edited by

            Cat back for my vote. The reader usually makes up in their mind much worse from personal experience, then what the artist can show. The cat forward is still cartoony, so you lessen the blow, even if it's meant to horrify. If it were realistic with oodles of blood, then yeah that would be way over the top. But cat facing away, I can imagine all kinds of stuff happening... where it's biting, how bad the bird looks, etc.

            Good job all round. Hope that helps.

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            • Naters.Art
              Naters.Art last edited by

              okay so i scratched both ideas and decided to play with light and atmosphere. Being a cartoonist, so i decided to take a "saturday morning cartoon" approach with the scene. let me know what you think.
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              • Chip Valecek
                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Naters.Art last edited by

                @Naters-Calderone I really like your style, however for the prompt I prefer your old man and baby concept more. But if it was me, I would take all of these ideas to finish. They are all great.


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                • Jiří Kůs
                  Jiří Kůs last edited by

                  I like the last one most 🙂

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                  • Naters.Art
                    Naters.Art @Chip Valecek last edited by

                    @Chip-Valecek yeah, for concept, that's my favorite one too. but it's not very dynamic. they look for skill over "cleverness"

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                    • MOO
                      MOO SVS OG last edited by

                      I love the one with the policeman and the box of spilled donuts and oozey leg. It made me laugh 🙂

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                      • amberwingart
                        amberwingart last edited by

                        I really like the policeman one - that one's really creative & you got an awesome angle on it! Really interesting angles appear to be one of your strengths!

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                        • Naters.Art
                          Naters.Art @MOO last edited by

                          @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen thanks. laughter is always my goal 🙂

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                          • Lee White
                            Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @Naters.Art last edited by

                            @Naters-Calderone not sure I agree with that one. Concept will always be #1 and execution will be secondary to that.

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                            • Naters.Art
                              Naters.Art @Lee White last edited by

                              @Lee-White good to know...that makes the decision harder though 🙂

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                              • Naters.Art
                                Naters.Art last edited by

                                I played around with the lighting on this one too, which is very similar to the lighting in the cop image...but it just doesn't have slime... I haven't worked on the old mans background yet, but i wanted to check with you all to see if i should continue with it or do you still think i should go with the monster pic? also, please let me know what I could improve upon in either.
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                                • Chip Valecek
                                  Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Naters.Art last edited by

                                  @Naters-Calderone I still like this one best, i would have him looking down at the baby vs out into the distance.


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