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    • Gary Wilkinson
      Gary Wilkinson last edited by

      Thank you for everyone's suggestions and comments, they will really help push the concept towards a final stage. I really appreciate you all taking the time to lend your knowledge and would love to reply to every comment individually, but I got a lot more replies than expected 🙂

      As it stands 9, 4 and 7 have had some great responses, so I will try to focus on those and see what can be improved to get it down to a final choice. The character designs were also posted on facebook and got over 400 replies for which a majority went for 7, however as some of you mentioned it could suffer due to restrictions in it's poses (i'm sure I can use it as a side/background character in a future project though...)

      One thing that will be a big factor in the ladybug's design is the shape of her friend the frog, as both are of equal standing in the story and have similar qualities, but I still want to make them work together, yet stand out on their own design. I've played around with about 10 designs, but it's felt more of a struggle than the ladybugs. Personally I like G if it were to go with 9 or H if it were to go with 4.

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      • Jake Parker
        Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by

        For what it's worth my kids really like ladybug 4. I think the face on 7 is very appealing. Maybe you could combine the two?

        Frog H is a great design!

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        • NessIllustration
          NessIllustration Pro @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

          @Gary-Wilkinson I really like C! I think the rounder frogs really complement the tall legged ladybug. C, G and J all have "gentle giant" vibes which work really great.

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          • Jeremiahbrown
            Jeremiahbrown last edited by

            E, F, J says my 8 year old. I like J. My son seems to like the larger characters which I think translates consistently across that age group.

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            • Jacy13
              Jacy13 @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

              @Gary-Wilkinson I really like F and I for the frogs 🙂
              They're all so cute though.

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              • Elliot
                Elliot @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                @Gary-Wilkinson I totally agree with 4 and H as a great combo!

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                • Gary Wilkinson
                  Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                  Again many many thanks for the comments and advice! So at the moment it feels like we might be going for 9 for the ladybug and I still have to work out the design of the frog to make them fit together, but E, G and H are the forerunners. I really want to do H, but I think the design is too similar so i'll play around to see if there is some room for it.

                  In the meantime I did some character studies for the 9 ladybug and so far it feels like is quite a solid character, but no final thoughts yet.... I also did some sketches for her "quaint little house", however it's only on 1 page so it's not a major thing, but all design is important right 🙂

                  Homes sm.jpg

                  Bria - Character Smartb sm.jpg

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                  • Gary Wilkinson
                    Gary Wilkinson last edited by Gary Wilkinson

                    Haven't had much experience with drawing frogs, so doing some study sketches and exploring other artist's versions.

                    Also trying some character studies of the frog character we might look at going with. I do like this design, but im a little concerned that it's not super unique and that it's head shape is a little too similar to the ladybug, but there is still enough time to play around with ideas. I also plan on doing another study sheet with a frog of a more round a large design too as many of you suggested 🙂

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                    Frog Color sm.jpg

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                    • Jacy13
                      Jacy13 @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                      @Gary-Wilkinson It's all looking really cute! 😃

                      I just wanted to give you a quick observation about your frog character. In the full body pose where he is on all fours, his legs and toes are reading more turtle like than frog to me. Just something that caught my attention right away 🙂

                      I can't wait to see more progress on the development of these characters and the project overall!

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                      • Gary Wilkinson
                        Gary Wilkinson @Jacy13 last edited by

                        @Jacy13 I see what you mean. I'll have to play around with the legs a bit more.

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                        • Jeremy Ross
                          Jeremy Ross @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                          Hi @Gary-Wilkinson, loving your studies; thanks for sharing with us! Your chosen ladybug character design was my fav.

                          Regarding her home, I find the can house most interesting.

                          Cheers!

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                          • Ghadeer Nemer
                            Ghadeer Nemer last edited by

                            All of them are amazing' I really l loved 7 the most!

                            Ghadeer Nemer

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                            • Gary Wilkinson
                              Gary Wilkinson last edited by Gary Wilkinson

                              Ok last one I promise. So there is a 3rd character who is a duck and he is the somewhat crazy/panicky one, whereas the other 2 characters are more level headed. Any opinions on what fits in the trio?

                              Ducks sm.jpg

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                              • Jacy13
                                Jacy13 @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                @Gary-Wilkinson I like G and H! 🙂

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                                • Cole Rts
                                  Cole Rts @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                  @Gary-Wilkinson I think G for the duck fits best with the other two characters

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    I really like A or C for the duck and just love the snail house or the van both very cute! Great sketches!!

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