Illustrations for Agency Catalog - Critiques Welcomed

[NessIllustration]

@Michael-Angelo-Go I agree with @Nyrryl-Cadiz Nyrryl! Getting a response in and of itself is an accomplishment. First time I submitted to Astound, I didn't get an answer at all! And now they're my agent. This answer could mean many different things with the way it's worded. Maybe their roster of artists is full at the moment and they're not looking. That's very likely since it's right before Christmas, a time where not much is happening. Maybe they still have a couple spots and want to fill it with a very specific kind of style that's missing in their catalogue, and you don't happen to fit that. In any case, work on your fundamentals and re-submit at a different time of the year - you may have very different results!

[braden H]

Nice work so far! Honestly enough I'm impressed at your ability to narrow down what you want to work on. I think I'll do the same!

I've really gotta get to work on my own submissions for this... Blurgh.

[ArtofJoseGalue]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz I really like the moon shape and the colors on the number 3.

You said:
"I have so much personal projects in the back burner. I need to stop making up new ones and finish my old ones. "
This is my struggle every day... glad I am not the only one.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

hello, everyone! Here's what I got so far. I prefer the sky colors in #1 but the characters are blending into the light background. While in #2, the characters are popping off the background, providing great readability.

I'm torn between the 2. Which should I choose? Please leave your vote below. Thank you!

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[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Braden-Hallett Hi! Thank you! I'm very happy you like it. Yes, this year I've decided to put more thought on my pieces for the catalog. I want to dazzle clients because this will be the one physical mailer that Advocate Art will be sending out throughout the year. ( as far as I know) I want my spread on the catalog to summarize my skills, the type of subjects I want to work in, and the type of books I'd be a great fit for.

I'm looking forward to your pieces for the catalog too! The deadline is fast approaching we need to up our speed.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@ArtofJoseGalue Thanks! Yes, I have a lot of ideas swirling in my head. I tend to jump from one project to the next without finishing the previous one. It's really a bad habit for me too.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

trying out something new. There's been a lot of nature books lately. including a forest scene is always good to your portfolio.

[Michael Angelo Go]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz I love this. It reminds me of Winnie the Pooh, something I loved when I was a toddler. The warm, earthy colors are a nice new touch

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Michael-Angelo-Go thank you!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

update! So far, this is my only piece that I'm closest to finishing. it feels good to have that sense of accomplishment.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz update almost done.

[Michael Angelo Go]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz Did you replaced the dad so all the characters in the composition are interacting with each other?

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Michael-Angelo-Go yup. he just seemed detached from the kids.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

Almost there! i've reached my most dreaded stage, painting in the water splashes.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

Almost done with this one. I still have a few bits to fix but almost there. I turned it to a square because I'll place it on the right full page as shown below.

This is my catalog spread last year. Sparse.

Edit: i just noticed after a full year, THEY GOT MY NAME WRONG!!!!!!!

[Neha Rawat]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz The bear one is so cute! I love the colors! I know you still have some work left in this but I'm mentioning my 2 cents here anyway in case it saves you time.

• The girl bear is missing a leg (unless it'll be covered with water splash)
• Little details like overlapping grass blades on the picnic basket and the mama bear's feet look good
• How about tiny eye lashes or flower in the head for the mama bear? It'll make the character easier to read.

I'm loving how you've done the trees and the flow of the cloth.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Neha-Rawat hi, Neha! Ah yes, I still haven’t added the leg on the girl bear. It’s coming in soon when I find time again. I like the idea of adding a flower the mom bear’s head. I’ll do that. ️

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

hi guys! I just finished this one.

[Neha Rawat]

@NessIllustration OooOoo lovely! The water splash is spot on! And good decision about flipping it as well!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Neha-Rawat thank you! I forgot to add the flower. I’m adding it fo sure