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    • Meg Clayburn
      Meg Clayburn @carlianne last edited by

      @carlianne yes! Idk why but that makes a huge difference to me.

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      • carlianne
        carlianne last edited by

        Okay trying out more sketches, here are a few ideas in each of the "close up" "walking" and "Sitting" categories. I need one for each set.

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        A1: brushing fang/ tusk
        A2: Making ice cream

        B1: About to slip on banana
        B2: Trying to help duckies stay dry

        C1: Sunbathing
        C2: Has a cold, and has frozen the area around him
        C3: Had a tea party disaster.

        I think I'm leaning towards A1,B2 and C2 at the moment. I'm finding that it's difficult to balance if I should be doing something more simple or something with more story.

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        • Meg Clayburn
          Meg Clayburn @carlianne last edited by

          @carlianne I'm actually looking A1 B1 and C1

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          • carlianne
            carlianne @Meg Clayburn last edited by

            @Meg-Clayburn Interesting! I asked around a few other places and mostly got A2, B2, C2, what is drawing you to those ones?

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            • Meg Clayburn
              Meg Clayburn @carlianne last edited by

              @carlianne I like the idea of A2 better but for this prompt I like A1 just because I can see more of his face.

              I like B1 because of the anticipation it creates. The idea of drawing something that is about to happen, and I as the viewer know it's going to happen, but the character doesn't. It's really fun and makes it feel more interactive. B2 is super cute, but that's all the emotion and interaction I get out of it, I guess I feel there not as much story to it cause there's nothing suggesting what could happen next?

              I like C1 because it's ironic. He's a character who can create ice cream with his breathe, freezes the area around him when he has a cold, and he decided to go sunbathing and enjoys it. I also think that A2 and C2 are too similar. I would do one of the other. Compositionally youre getting now diagonals or if C1 than all of the sketches so it adds some variety that way.

              Meg Clayburn

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              • carlianne
                carlianne last edited by

                Super helpful, thanks @Meg-Clayburn

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                • carlianne
                  carlianne last edited by

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                  Working through small iterations like the eye shape and if he should have a scarf or a belly line (I'm thinking this could subtly indicate he's actually a stuffed animal)

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                  • Meg Clayburn
                    Meg Clayburn @carlianne last edited by

                    @carlianne definitely A.

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                    • carlianne
                      carlianne last edited by

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                      About to move onto the poses now

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                      • carlianne
                        carlianne last edited by

                        Reworking my sketches because I wasn't feeling happy with them. This character can make snow and ice and he's in the end just a stuffed animal, so I felt like I should be highlighting what makes him special in his poses.

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                        Any feedback here welcome!

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