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    Illustrations for Agency Catalog - Critiques Welcomed

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    • braden H
      braden H last edited by

      Awesome! It's all lookin' real nice!

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      • Neha Rawat
        Neha Rawat last edited by

        @Nyrryl-Cadiz Such a tricky perspective and you've nailed it! Such lovely magical vibes! ✨

        If I may be nit picky, the center building is quite a warm purple and almost competing with the red sleigh/santa. Maybe adjust that a tad and see if makes a difference?

        https://www.nrbstudio.in/
        https://www.instagram.com/nrbstudio.in

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        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

          @Braden-Hallett @Neha-Rawat Thank you!

          @Neha-Rawat i see what you mean. I've already moved on to the medusa piece but if I still have time left, I'll get back to it. What about you? Have you already sent in your pieces for the catalog?

          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
          YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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          • Neha Rawat
            Neha Rawat @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

            @Nyrryl-Cadiz Yeah. Fortunately I managed to salvage some time between 2 projects so I submitted 2 pieces earlier this month.

            https://www.nrbstudio.in/
            https://www.instagram.com/nrbstudio.in

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            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

              One day left, still a long way to go.

              medusa 7 rgb small.jpg

              Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
              YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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              • Kim Rosenlof
                Kim Rosenlof @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                @Nyrryl-Cadiz I love the perspective and the animals are so cute! It makes me want to know what is going on in the story!

                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                  @Kim-Rosenlof thank you!

                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                  YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

                    update on Medusa piece. it's due tonight. i'm so stressed. 😬 😬 😬

                    medusa 10 rgb small.jpg

                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                    • rubeda
                      rubeda @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                      @Nyrryl-Cadiz don't be stressed it's looking really great! can I suggest something to you? You have a rim light on medusa and the statue on the foreground but not on the hero (what;s his name? trying to remember clash of the titans!) also maybe you could darken the statue in the foreground and then maybe lightening up the building in the background or maybe adding some smoke effects creating some depth and atmosphere.. just a thought other than that it looks GREAT!

                      Alex
                      IG: https://www.instagram.com/rubeda/
                      email: rafael.ubeda@gmail.com
                      website:https://rafaelalexubeda.myportfolio.com/

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @rubeda last edited by

                        @rubeda thanks! I’m submitting my pieces in a few minutes though. I really have no time left. Maybe I can revisit it in the future.

                        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                        • rubeda
                          rubeda @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                          @Nyrryl-Cadiz no worries! you will be fine! they look great!

                          Alex
                          IG: https://www.instagram.com/rubeda/
                          email: rafael.ubeda@gmail.com
                          website:https://rafaelalexubeda.myportfolio.com/

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                          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

                            hi everyone! So I was going to submit this piece as seen below but @rubeda made a great point about adding smoke effects so I decided to add a last minute mist and I really like the new look. This is it for the medusa piece. I'm tired and really stressed but so relieved it's over. thanks for all the help everyone!

                            medusa 11 rgb small.jpg

                            medusa 13 rgb small.jpg

                            Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                            YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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