6 Feb 2021, 12:05

@Casual-T Cool concept. A couple of random thoughts that struck me:

  • A bit of liquid could seep out where the cord attaches to illustrate the nutrient aspect.
  • The wood part has clearly been created with a tool. Depending on the story background for this it could make more sense for the wood to be processed by the teeth of the mouse, thus being more raw.
  • The perspective of the wire does not seem to align with the perspective of the wooden stand. I think the 'S' curve at the right should be flattened a bit vertically for it to fit.