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    Winslow the Yeti cooks!! WIP

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    • Valerie Light
      Valerie Light last edited by

      Hello @Georgios-Christopoulos , these are so cute! I really like the composition that you chose to go with, mainly because of how you're using the space and filling it with story telling details. However, I like the face and arm position of the yeti from the top right thumbnail, because I think he shows more of the 'flair' with cooking that the prompt says. Can't wait to see where this goes next!

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      • Georgios Christopoulos
        Georgios Christopoulos @Valerie Light last edited by

        @Valerie-Light thanks so much!! Yes I was thinking this too. I was so close to picking that one.. Might still do, or I might work on some more concepts.. What do you think of the kids witnessing the magic of Winslows cooking? Do they add to the image or are they irrelevant to the story?

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        • Valerie Light
          Valerie Light @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

          @Georgios-Christopoulos You know, now that you mention it, I really like how the kids in the top right sketch are engaged with the cooking more than the kid in the top left prompt. Maybe a way to combine those two roughs and take the best of both worlds?

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          • Niels
            Niels @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

            @Georgios-Christopoulos Ha! They look a kin to the rough sketches I did to brainstorm on this topic. I think I like the first one the most, though they all have a nice energy to them.
            The letters I like a bit less. The typeface makes the sentence a bit hard to read for me, and intuitively feels like it clashes with the picture itself.

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            • Georgios Christopoulos
              Georgios Christopoulos @Niels last edited by

              @Niels I agree with the font. it starts to get a bit confusing.I ll have to find a more subtle one!thanks for your comment Niels!!

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              • Rekha Salin 0
                Rekha Salin 0 @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                @Georgios-Christopoulos I love the top 2nd one the most. Though the 1st has space properly utilized and more elements, the 2nd one has more of story, the expressions and the way the hands are used in cooking, the kids both of them have different expressions which is so good.

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                • Georgios Christopoulos
                  Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                  @Rekha-Salin-0 that is true!I also liked the fact of hands being used and children having expressions on that one!thinking I might fuse somehow no1 and 2 together..

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                  • Georgios Christopoulos
                    Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                    Final sketch is done!!!
                    Inking is the next phase!!
                    What do you guys thinkg of this??
                    Winslow is having fun with those kiddos!

                    Yeti cooking2.2.jpg

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                    • Lindsey Pittenger
                      Lindsey Pittenger @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                      @Georgios-Christopoulos Love it! So cute 🙂

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                      • Georgios Christopoulos
                        Georgios Christopoulos @Lindsey Pittenger last edited by

                        @Lindsey-Pittenger thanks a lot!!! I ve made a cute entry at last!! 🙂

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                        • Georgios Christopoulos
                          Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                          Here we go!
                          Flat colours and Inks!
                          Rendering and some effects are next!
                          What do you think fellas??

                          Yeti cooking2.5.jpg

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                          • Naters.Art
                            Naters.Art @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                            @Georgios-Christopoulos I know you're pretty far along, but I just noticed that all their mouths are the same. Maybe the youngling in the middle could be licking their lips or something. but it's looking great!

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                            • Georgios Christopoulos
                              Georgios Christopoulos @Naters.Art last edited by

                              @Naters-Art This is actually a pretty good feedback!thanks!!

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                              • Valerie Light
                                Valerie Light last edited by

                                I love your interpretation of the secret spices and the cooking gear. That's really well thought out. And cute, too!

                                On first glance, 2 drawing notes stood out to me: the bottom of the tree stump on the left is maybe the only thing in the picture that isn't outlined. I think it needs a more descriptive edge, like the top of the stump has. And I think there's something off about the shape of the fire ring with the kettle in it- I wonder if the rocks closest to the kettle should be lower, and obstructed by the shape of the grill thing?
                                Also, will there be fire in the fire pit?

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                                • Georgios Christopoulos
                                  Georgios Christopoulos @Valerie Light last edited by

                                  @Valerie-Light Thanks for the words Valerie!! On your first note, every objects bottom will be covered in snow, linework and colour! On the second note I see your point,thanks!!
                                  Lastly, embers and flames will be added at the secondary effects phase,after shade and highlight!
                                  Hope you ll like the end result!!

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                                  • Georgios Christopoulos
                                    Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                    So, here we have Winslow the Yeti, cooking for the young generation!!
                                    I am thinking of adding some text or caption,but I think I am done overall.
                                    What do you guys think??

                                    Yeti cooking2.7.jpg

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                                    • miranda-hoover
                                      miranda-hoover @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                      @Georgios-Christopoulos Looks great! I love their expressions

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                                      • Georgios Christopoulos
                                        Georgios Christopoulos @miranda-hoover last edited by

                                        @miranda-hoover thanks a lot!!!

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                                        • Jeremiahbrown
                                          Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                                          @Georgios-Christopoulos The expression change on the middle Yeti makes a big difference. Nice work!

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                                          • Georgios Christopoulos
                                            Georgios Christopoulos @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                                            @Jeremiahbrown thanks my friend! It is all thanks to @Naters-Art suggestion! Glad you enjoy the artwork!Also thanks for the follow on IG. Hope you have fun with my art!

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