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    March WIP - Fairytale Flower - final touches

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    • Jacy13
      Jacy13 @carlianne last edited by

      @carlianne C is fantastic! 🙂 Love the ladybug.

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      • Neha Rawat
        Neha Rawat last edited by

        @carlianne This is so cute! I have a suggestion (I've not tried it before because I literally just thought of it)

        I can see you've used an overlay texture on the whole image and it's looking great! Maybe just to make it look a teeny bit better, try creating a mask of the texture for each element (background, leaves, flower, fairy) in a different orientation so that it's not obvious to the view that you've just applied a short cut overall texture.

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          Mara Price @carlianne last edited by

          @carlianne said in March WIP - Fairytale Flower - color study stage:

          Not really for

          Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful!

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          • carlianne
            carlianne @Neha Rawat last edited by

            @Neha-Rawat oh yeah that is what Lee says in his texture video! I should just stop being lazy 😂

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            • LauraA
              LauraA SVS OG last edited by

              I love it!! I think this iteration shifted it into another gear altogether.

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              • K.Flagg
                K.Flagg last edited by

                love the color Pallet! very cute!

                K.Flagg

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                • Tiffany Thomas
                  Tiffany Thomas @carlianne last edited by

                  @carlianne I love her and the color palette!! The texture and light are wonderful! Can't wait to see you final submission :).

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                  • Larue
                    Larue last edited by

                    Love the painterly style and how the lighting is working. Great textures.

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                    • carlianne
                      carlianne last edited by

                      Okay working on the poses

                      To flush out my story idea, my idea is that she lives in a village that is under siege by frogs, and she's been sent to find repellants (lemons from the lemon tree) but she has to travel through frog territory to get there (the pond).

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                      • Georgios Christopoulos
                        Georgios Christopoulos @carlianne last edited by

                        @carlianne Beautiful illo.Also the layout sketch is nice. An idea if you want it 🙂 Maybe add a close up of her looking at a lemon tree picture ,so she can recognize it once she looks at it at real life (indicating that it is her first time stepping out of her village and she had not seen a lemon tree yet in her life)
                        Just my 2 cents!!!
                        Keep it up, the character is beautiful!

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                        • carlianne
                          carlianne last edited by

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                          Just refining and cleaning up, would love to know if that cast shadow in the bottom right is working

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                          • K.Flagg
                            K.Flagg last edited by

                            Looks great! I think the shadow is a nice touch since it draws your eye back toward the center.

                            K.Flagg

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                            • carlianne
                              carlianne @K.Flagg last edited by

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                              • carlianne
                                carlianne @K.Flagg last edited by

                                @K-Flagg thank you, that is a great point!

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                                • carlianne
                                  carlianne last edited by

                                  I wasn't feeling happy with the shadow, so I swapped out the pose and made some other changes, just trying to nail this down before I paint later

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                                  • carlianne
                                    carlianne @carlianne last edited by

                                    @carlianne starting to add color
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                                    • Natalie Lundeen
                                      Natalie Lundeen @carlianne last edited by

                                      @carlianne Ooh, this looks so good, Carli!

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                                      • carlianne
                                        carlianne last edited by

                                        I didn't like my layout, so I am trying to make one of the poses more of a focal point

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                                        • K.Flagg
                                          K.Flagg last edited by

                                          I like the new layout better! Looks good!

                                          K.Flagg

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                                          • carlianne
                                            carlianne @K.Flagg last edited by

                                            @K-Flagg @Natalie-Lundeen thank you!! ❤

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