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    • Beatriz "Bett"
      Beatriz "Bett" last edited by

      Sergio, 1-5 picture book.
      Lynn, How to bend the wing and make it look like it is waving is what I am trying to find out.

      02 Butterfly.jpg

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      • Beatriz "Bett"
        Beatriz "Bett" @Beatriz "Bett" last edited by

        @Beatriz-"Bett" Now it is too big. Can someone correct size this? So much to learn.

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        • Beatriz "Bett"
          Beatriz "Bett" last edited by

          @Will-Terry @Jake-Parker or @Lee-White or others in the group. Some help will be appreciated!

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          • Beatriz "Bett"
            Beatriz "Bett" last edited by

            Well I came up with this. What do you think? I know it is very rough.Butterfly Wave Sketch.jpg

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            • Thrace
              Thrace @Beatriz "Bett" last edited by

              @Beatriz-"Bett" you can go to google.com and find references such as this one to help. th.jpeg

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              • Joy Heyer
                Joy Heyer last edited by

                I feel a bent wing will translate into injury since butterfly wings aren't that flexible..if at all. But butterflies have legs. It might make more sense if it is waving with a leg.

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                • Bobby Aquitania
                  Bobby Aquitania @Beatriz "Bett" last edited by Bobby Aquitania

                  @Beatriz-"Bett" said:

                  @Beatriz-"Bett" Now it is too big. Can someone correct size this? So much to learn.

                  if you're using photoshop, use the export choice instead of the normal save as under the file tab,
                  then select web, and your final size will appear in the lower right corner, change that and hit save.
                  I always make it 800 by height if the height is over 800 pixels wide.
                  You can go as wide as 1024, but again check your height. Hope that helps.

                  As to you main problem, if you don't want to draw arms, you could put hands on the edge of your wings...

                  1453995324148-02-butterfly.jpg

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                  • Naroth Kean
                    Naroth Kean last edited by

                    It looks like they are saying hi instead of goodbye. I would turn the butterfly around and show it in 3/4 view, it should help convincing the departure of the bug.

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                    • Beatriz "Bett"
                      Beatriz "Bett" last edited by

                      Thanks to everyone for your input. I appreciate it.

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                      • Lynn Larson
                        Lynn Larson SVS OG @Beatriz "Bett" last edited by

                        @Beatriz-"Bett" sorry i didn't get back sooner! but yes, that is what i meant by bending a tip of the wing 🙂

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                        • MOO
                          MOO SVS OG last edited by

                          I like bending the tip of the wing too. I also like the waving arm but my first thought was to bend the wing. It's a story so you can "bend" the rules on what is real and natural. Butterflies, in real life, do not wave good bye anyway 🙂

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                          • Charlie Eve Ryan
                            Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                            I like Trace's example, with the arms.

                            But if you want to use the wings, I think you need to make the butterfly a bit more animated and expressive. Also since the text says it for you, you don't necessarily have to show the butterfly doing it, especially since all the other characters are already waving.

                            Here's is a rough example with motion lines and an expression on the butterfly. Good luck with the project, it looks really cute! 😃
                            Butterflywavesm.jpg

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                            • sergio
                              sergio last edited by sergio

                              Butterflies --> 4 wings

                              I think you can use @Charlie-Eve-Ryan Idea but giving to both front wings the same "arm" aspect.

                              mariposa.jpg

                              .Another solution is to change the point of view and use the front legs as armas.

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                              • Beatriz "Bett"
                                Beatriz "Bett" last edited by

                                Thanks Everyone. I appreciate your suggestions and thought processes.

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                                • Beatriz "Bett"
                                  Beatriz "Bett" @Beatriz "Bett" last edited by

                                  @Beatriz-"Bett" On the left is what the illustration looks like now. What do you think if I flip it, like on the right?

                                  Butterfly jpg.jpg

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                                  • Beatriz "Bett"
                                    Beatriz "Bett" last edited by

                                    If someone could let me know which version they like better I will appreciate it. Picture 1 on the left or Picture 2 on the right? Thanks.

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                                    • Charlie Eve Ryan
                                      Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG @Beatriz "Bett" last edited by

                                      @Beatriz-"Bett" Hi Beatriz, I would probably go with the one on the right...since the butterflies action reads left to right, the way you read a book. Hope that helps.

                                      Then again if the monkey in the tree is your main character then having him fly left to right is better and you should go with the left one.

                                      So really it depends on the story. Does the monkey land on the next page after the page turn or the butterfly?

                                      Happy Creating
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                                      • Beatriz "Bett"
                                        Beatriz "Bett" @Charlie Eve Ryan last edited by

                                        @Charlie-Eve-Ryan Thank you Charlie.

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                                        • Leontine
                                          Leontine last edited by

                                          Nice Beatrice! I'd prefer the right one as well!

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                                          • Lynn Larson
                                            Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                                            I agree with the right one 🙂

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