Third one!!! Hope I make it!!

[Georgios Christopoulos]

Here is an idea I wanted to execute!!
Hope I ll make it!
Dominic is the man!!

[braden H]

@Georgios-Christopoulos Yeeeeeees. More entriiiiiiies! MORE ENTRIEEEEEES!

[Georgios Christopoulos]

@Braden-Hallett ahahaha!!!!

[lizardillo]

FISH HEAD!!!

[Georgios Christopoulos]

@lizardillo you know it!!!

[Georgios Christopoulos]

[ValD]

You are ON FIRE !

[Georgios Christopoulos]

@ValD thanks so much!!!!

[Georgios Christopoulos]

It s 1:00 am here at Greece!time to sleep.
Finishing touches tomorrow.
Drop your 2 cents if you see anything!
Too sleepy to be careful lol!!
See you guys

[K.Flagg]

@Georgios-Christopoulos Yassssss! I love it!

[Georgios Christopoulos]

@K-Flagg hah!thanks!!

Ok guys! I think I am done with the 3rd one! What is your opinion, story text or no story text?
Also, you english language native speakers, are there any obvious mistakes on the text???
i d appreciate the help with this