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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos @JohnFox last edited by

      @JohnFox thank you! I’m glad you noticed I thought that was a fun detail too😁

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        Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

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        Made some edits added a some barnacles to the spear gave him some cuffs and a lucky crab claw also a scar below his eye and some snippets from his tail to show that while naive he is also a bit scrappy. I want to add a tattoo to his arm but not sure of what yet... should I go abstract tribal or something like a fish or squid? What do you think?

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          Asyas_illos last edited by

          Another pose down! Not sure I will finish this one on time...

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by

            I’ll reposition these but any feedback as far as consistency?5A292B77-107F-4044-98A4-8E6DAB01D087.jpeg

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            • Julia Hegetusch
              Julia Hegetusch last edited by

              Hi, Im a beginner at this, but to me they look very consistent. Really like your second entry 🙂

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos @Julia Hegetusch last edited by

                @Julia-Hegetusch thank you beginner or not it’s always nice to have another’s opinions and seen through different eyes 👀

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                • Jacy13
                  Jacy13 @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos It looks pretty consistent to me! The only area where there may be a question of consistency is the hair on the pose that's 2nd down on the left. Every other pose has that really thick hair, while this one's kind of flat. That might be to show his movement through the water though, so feel free to disregard entirely 🙂

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos @Jacy13 last edited by Asyas_illos

                    @Jacy13 yes it’s supposed to imply that he is swimming and it’s flowing back for some reason I had a really hard time keeping his eyes and facial features consistent 🤔

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                      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                      What do you think of this layout should I include the palm leaves in the sitting pose? Or does it seem too busy? Is the hair more convincing now that I added some movement to the water?
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                        Asyas_illos @Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

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                        ok ready for color! Should be able to finish by tomorrow ...

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          Well any last thoughts on this? I’m pretty happy with it😁
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                            JohnFox @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Asyas_illos looks great to me! Glad I got to see it finished. Good luck in the competition.

                            John

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                              Asyas_illos @JohnFox last edited by

                              @JohnFox thank you!

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