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    Portfolio project - Princess and the pea

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    • Navya Raju
      Navya Raju last edited by Navya Raju

      Hello everyone, I'm currently working on a series of illustrations for my portfolio, I've decided to do a modern retelling of the classic, 'Princess and the pea.' I have worked on a couple of draft sketches, this is my mini feedback corner would love to share my process sketches as I go along.Princess-And-Pea-1.jpg Princess-And-Pea-Character-Sketches.jpg

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      Princess-And-Pea-Character-Sketches 1.jpg

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      • Kim Hunter
        Kim Hunter last edited by

        I understand your logic but, Hotel Pea? Little kids will giggle for days on that one. Perhaps something like, The Pea Pod Hotel, might be a little less suggestive of the bathroom.

        I might vary the size and structure of the mattresses pile them in a less organized manner. And show her writhing around, trying to get comfortable.

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          • Navya Raju
            Navya Raju @Kim Hunter last edited by

            @Kim-Hunter hmmm... makes sense

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            • mag
              mag Pro SVS OG @Kim Hunter last edited by

              Love your sketches! And (sorry to disagree) but I think the name of the hotel is pure gold! My 4 year old would love it! And of course she would giggle over it day and night... but that’s not a bad thing, isn’t it? 😅

              Mag
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                Navya Raju @mag last edited by

                @mag Haha, I thought so too.

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