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    • Julia Hegetusch
      Julia Hegetusch @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

      @Gary-Wilkinson These are very well done. Amazing. They look extremely professionel to me. No critique here except great work

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      • Jeremy Ross
        Jeremy Ross @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

        Well done @Gary-Wilkinson! Looking forward to seeing the others!

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        • lpetiti
          lpetiti last edited by

          I love this interpretation of reimagining children’s book characters! It really captures a child’s imagination and the way kids play.

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          • cianamacaroni
            cianamacaroni last edited by cianamacaroni

            Nice! The only thing I’d say is that the glasses lenses feel stuck to the face and a little too matte. I haven’t taken it yet, but Will’s class about drawing different textures might help you get the right sheen. And I think some sort of shadow beneath the lenses would help distinguish that they are on a separate plane. Hope that makes sense. The hairclip also looks like it’s right on the part of her hair right now, not like it’s holding hair out of her face, which is a little bit confusing. Other than that, it’s a great piece. Love the dramatic lighting. It really feels like she/they are in their own little world.

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              They are absolutely wonderful! Very well done. Can’t wait to see more!

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              • Janette
                Janette @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Asyas_illos I LOVE this! I want to get to this level of painting!

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos @Janette last edited by

                  @Janette you probably meant @Gary-Wilkinson ☺️ I wish I was at this skill level!!

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                  • Janette
                    Janette @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @Asyas_illos Oh Maaaaaaaaan! I'm failing here at my forum game!

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @Janette last edited by

                      @Janette haha no worries!

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                      • Tiffany Thomas
                        Tiffany Thomas @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                        @Gary-Wilkinson So, fantastic! I love seeing all the steps you've taken to get to the final image and hands-down #4 definitely has the most impact. So fun, I can't wait to see what you do with the other characters.

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                        • Gary Wilkinson
                          Gary Wilkinson @cianamacaroni last edited by

                          Thank you for all the comments. I hope I can expand more on these and I really appreciate your critiques

                          @cianamacaroni good points. I was going to put the hair clip in more correct position but it felt like it looked better to the side. I should have asked my wife about where is correct though 😛 also I see what you mean about the glasses, maybe needs more of a touch up

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                          • Gary Wilkinson
                            Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                            Started work on the Voldemort character and my original plan was to have him hold a flower that was falling apart to refer to his wand in the last movie. However, it doesnt feel like it fits the painting well and doesnt have much in common with the Harry painting. Im thinking to perhaps take out the flower and add a hose pipe that is spraying water. Any thoughts on that and the color choices for the painting?

                            Voldemort changes.jpg

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                            • Larue
                              Larue last edited by

                              I so admire all your work. It brings a smile to my face. The joy and thoughtfulness you put into each painting is so contagious.

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                              • Jeremy Ross
                                Jeremy Ross @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                Hi @Gary-Wilkinson, looking good! Actually, I kinda prefer the flower wand over the water hose, but both look cool. Perhaps a magenta background for added tension??

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  I agree with @Jeremy-Ross the flower has something more magical too it, and a little ironic I guess cuz he’s supposed to be a baddie?

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                                  • Tiffany Thomas
                                    Tiffany Thomas @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                    @Gary-Wilkinson I like the hose better, I think it has a much stronger relationship to the Harry image with the umbrella dripping water, I can totally imagine the duel they are having, lol. The flower idea is super cute and maybe can be used for one of the other characters. I also really like the colors, dark and moody violet, I think it works well with the character. Can't wait to see this one done!!!!

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos @Tiffany Thomas last edited by

                                      @Tiffany-Thomas ooh I didn’t make that connection, good call!

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                                      • Fay
                                        Fay @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                        @Gary-Wilkinson Such a wonderful piece! 😃 I noticed his sleeve wasn’t resting/draping on his arm, is this intentional?

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                                        • Gary Wilkinson
                                          Gary Wilkinson @Fay last edited by Gary Wilkinson

                                          @Fay Not intentional, but hopefully when I add light and shadow it should clear up issues, though im sure there are many 😛

                                          A little step forward, not there yet, but trying to work out a nice color scheme for it as I go. I'm not 100% sure about the hose addition yet though as I want to keep the voldemort wand pose, but not sure its working so well with that prop. Thank you @Jeremy-Ross @Asyas_illos and @Tiffany-Thomas for your critiques about that.

                                          @Larue That's a lovely thing to hear 🙂

                                          Voldemort 7b.jpg

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                                          • Tiffany Thomas
                                            Tiffany Thomas @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                            @Gary-Wilkinson Ohhh you could try a watering can (though it is less wand shaped), or a water balloon? Haha, trying to think of alternatives to the hose that still work with the Harry concept. It's looking good though, I still like the hose and I love that you've incorporated the house colors into each of the characters...so fun!

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