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    You tie some, you lose some - Rework of GingerBnB!

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    • ellenseal_art
      ellenseal_art last edited by

      Hey everybody! It was so fun to battle it out in the critique arena with my little gingerbread inn. Ending in a tie was super exciting (even if I ultimately lost) - I love a dramatic finish.

      Here's the rework I did based on the critique I got from Jake about making it "less clumpy." Any feedback you have is welcomed! I'm hoping to polish this up as much as I can and throw it into my portfolio. Thanks 🙂

      ellenseal14_ReworkedInn.png

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      • Jeremy Ross
        Jeremy Ross @ellenseal_art last edited by

        Congratulations @ellenseal14 for making the Sweet 16!

        Although I liked your piece as-submitted, the additions you made are good too. You can even push the center chimney cupcake/ice cream higher or integrate it into the main structure to bring more variety to the silhouette.

        Nice work!

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        • ellenseal_art
          ellenseal_art @Jeremy Ross last edited by

          @Jeremy-Ross Thanks! I thought that the chimney was a little wonky but I wasn't sure of the best way to attach it. I'll keep fiddling with it.

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