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    • jenn
      jenn @Leah last edited by

      @Leah The 1st one definitely reads as weak, and structurally falling to pieces. The 2nd one exudes a vibe of confidence, like a strong personality. I like that take on it (as opposed to physical strength).

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        jenn @Heather Boyd last edited by

        @Heather-Boyd I can see that the gray ones have more deliberate shapes. Did you draw those after the red ones?

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        • Lisa Clark
          Lisa Clark @jenn last edited by

          @jenn Yes, that's so true. I totally didn't see that and I'm glad you pointed that out.

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          • Heather Boyd
            Heather Boyd @jenn last edited by Heather Boyd

            @jenn yes! and thanks -I am trying to be more deliberate especially with shapes.

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            • Heather Boyd
              Heather Boyd last edited by

              Pontoon Planes -Multiple Angles Friday May 14th 2021 HB SVS.jpg

              Multiple perspective practice of the Pontoon Plane. 🙂

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                jenn @Heather Boyd last edited by

                @Heather-Boyd Nice job 'carving' the shape of the fuselage/plane body from the block forms, getting the perspective down, and positioning all the parts. The pontoons also look solid and buoyant.

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                  jenn @Heather Boyd last edited by

                  Hi folks, here's my container ship. This shape was pretty challenging probably because it was just so massive. I had trouble breaking it down into basic shapes.

                  ship2.jpg

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                  • Heather Boyd
                    Heather Boyd @jenn last edited by Heather Boyd

                    @jenn I agree the ship was harder than I thought also (might be posting this weekend or two weeks from now- depends on how things are going). I had trouble with perspective and the ship being in water. I think your "cargo" may be a tad large.

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                    • Heather Boyd
                      Heather Boyd last edited by

                      Today seems like a better day to post. 🙂

                      Cargo Ships SVS.jpg

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                      • jenn
                        jenn @Heather Boyd last edited by

                        @Heather-Boyd nice work 'carving' the shape out of the block. It looks believable and seaworthy. I feel like the nose of the ship in the top image should curve inward more as it gets closer to the water. Thanks for your feedback on mine too.

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