Should I ditch it or try to save it? ;)

aska

@Melissa-Bailey-0 @Kevin-Treaccar
thank you both for your comments.
I feel more motivated to continue!

good point about too small cabin and one more face!
I have added a few more details and very slight new mountain faces for now...what do you think?

I will be pointing it on a big piece of wooden canvas (120/80cm), so really need to get a good draft before i start...

Therefore I am hoping for more support

Melissa_Bailey

@aska it's coming together!

Sorry, I might be totally blind, but where are the 'very slight new mountain faces'?

The goat is a detail you might not need -- I find that it draws my eye away from the faces and cabin.

Really cool that this will be painted on wood! Please show us how it turns out!

aska

@Melissa-Bailey-0 thank you! I am still not sure about other faces. I started painting today. I will figure it out on the way... I am so inpatient that I decided to start painting before completing the draft in 100%...;-)

aska

Hi guys, I just wanted to share my progress with you. Critiques are welcome. Its still not too late to improve:-)

Melissa_Bailey

@aska Looking beautiful! Love seeing your traditional work!

Question for you: where is the intended focal point in this piece?

Asyas_illos

Looks beautiful traditional! My eyes go to the mountain man on the left

aska

@Melissa-Bailey-0 Thank u! it will be the house once I finish it. I will draw a delicate light in the windows. DO you think it will be a good focal point?

aska

@Asyas_illos thank you! It's only this year that I started painting traditionally on canvas. Apart from smelly paints, I find it more relaxing than digital art. I gues its good to switch between the two forms. I live variety

Asyas_illos

@aska variety is good

Melissa_Bailey

@aska absolutely! The way that the painting is composed, it makes sense that the house would be the focal point.

aska

Finished! I am very happy with it However I didn't varnish it and if you smth that I should change, please tell me!