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    This is my first post. Can anyone critique?

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      Crystalcaldy last edited by

      I'd like some feedback on this painting I finished! I am mostly trying to fix lighting and anatomy issues but please let me know if you see anything else!Screenshot (10).png

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        aska @Crystalcaldy last edited by

        @Crystalcaldy Welcome to forum! And Great job! If I were to change anything, I would tone down the whiskers. In my opinion these are too shiny. Or perhaps add some more light in the eyes, so the whiskers are not the shinest any more? Is it traditional or digital? 🙂

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          Crystalcaldy @aska last edited by

          @aska Thank you for the warm welcome! I agree about the whiskers, I think I'll add some light in the eyes as you said. Also, it's a digital painting!

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            Larue last edited by

            Welcome! Right now his mane is mostly all the same value. I think you could hit it with some bright hi lites and darker low lights. Pick your light direction, from up above or down below:)

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              Crystalcaldy @Larue last edited by

              @Larue Thanks! I'll make a note of that.

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