June Contest - Albert the Fennec Complete (Critiques Welcome)
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@Gary-Wilkinson I think longer tie works a little bit better as it emphasises the character's small size. You've done a really nice job of pushing the cute proportions, I really love everything about this character design !
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I like the darker colours but prefer the shorter tie. It’s framed nicely in his belly. It all gets a bit busy where it ends when it is longer.
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Speaking for all of us who had to wear a tie for school—like, a real tie, not a clip on one, ALL the cool (rebellious) kids wore their tie as short as they could get away with. Somewhere, wrapped around their bodies, like a fabric snake, the rest of the tie was hidden.
I was not a cool or rebellious kid. I was a rule follower. My tie was regulation length.
I LOVE this character.
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Darker colour and shorter tie gets my vote. Maybe even shorter for the tie? I agree with @janette about the rebelliousness
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I vote for darker ears and shorter tie as well. Wonderful character.
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@Rachel-Horne @brettb_draws @lizardillo @ruth @demotlj Great feedback on the tie and the black areas. I think a mixture of both wins the day.
@Janette I say the same thing as an adult!
Well i'm not going to have it done for the contest, but it's been great practice nonetheless and i'll try finish off the other poses to add to my portfolio.
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You've put so much work into him, he's going to be a wonderful portfolio piece. Please keep us updated if you carry on, I would love to see him all finished.
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@Gary-Wilkinson Oh that's a shame! Definitely one of my favourites!
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@Gary-Wilkinson Really great design! I like the stand out features and the colors you chose.
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Still working on finishing off Albert here and there....
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@Gary-Wilkinson he’s looking amazing
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@Gary-Wilkinson he’s such a cutie! And I love how you work with light and color! Thanks for sharing.
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Finally managed to finish Albert. He became a fox/ fennec hybrid in the end. Didn't manage to get it in for the contest, but it's been a fun side project and hopefully a good one for the portfolio
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@Gary-Wilkinson This is amazing !! There's so much character in his expression and movements and the shape language is really nice. You've rendered it beautifully as well. I wish I was better with colour and light. If I was, this is definitely the sort of thing that I would have loved to work on. It's a shame you couldn't get it completed in time, this could've won for sure.
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@Gary-Wilkinson Those ears! So expressive in shape! And the translucent pink at the base of the ear
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My absolute favourite!
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Really great design! I love what you did with painting his name, that is so clever!
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@K-Flagg @brettb_draws @Oana @Janette
Thank you for the kind comments. Hopefully I can build a house for him for this months contest. I'll try start a little earlier if I can
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New to SVS here. Absolutely adorable and well put together character design. Besides, how not to love a character that is named just like me?
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He is wonderful, I’m so glad you finished him. Thanks for sharing.
