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    Light and Shadow for Illustrators feedback

    SVS Class Work
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    • ambria
      ambria last edited by

      Hello! For this class I put a bit of extra work into shading the room. I also edited some of the line work to make it a bit cleaner. I wanted to try this one on my own instead of following along with the video? Can anyone give me some feedback? How did I do? Thanks! 🙂
      This is just shadows btw.
      Screen Shot 2021-07-26 at 3.31.34 PM.png

      Ambria (Bri) :D

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      • Larue
        Larue last edited by

        I think you're doing a great job but my only issue is that it appears your light source is the lamp in the right corner(? ) but I can't see any light actually coming from it! The light /lamp would cast a bright sharp edge ray of light shining on the wall and down on the pillows below it as well as a bit of light coming from the top opening.I think it would be a good idea to make all the shadows all a bit dark as well. You can google lamp on in dark room to see samples. I like your layout!

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        • ambria
          ambria @Larue last edited by

          @Larue This is just the shadow that I have done. I haven't gotten to the part about light yet. Thanks for the feedback!

          Ambria (Bri) :D

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