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    May I have a little critique? Someone told me the eyes look wonky

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    • Daisy
      Daisy last edited by

      Hello!
      I hope you're having a lovely day! I am shamelessly asking for critique.

      I purposefully wanted to keep these little drawings simple and cute, without much detail. But someone told me the eyes look weird and lifeless. It's not my usual style, but I didn't think it looked weird. Now I'm unsure. What do y'all think? And thank you for your time!

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      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Daisy last edited by

        @Daisy hi! I love this. Maybe u can add some sparkles into their eyes

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        • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
          Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

          @Nyrryl-Cadiz @Daisy Nyrryl's idea is really good. I like the eyes, they don't look wonky to me. I wonder if gently underlining the lower part of the eye with a darker colour than the skin tone would be something that might bring more focus to the eyes. Looks good to me.

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          • Daisy
            Daisy last edited by

            Thank you @Nyrryl-Cadiz and @Judy-Elizabeth-Wilson! I will try that 😃

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            • Nico Ecenarro
              Nico Ecenarro last edited by

              They look fine to me, too. Lovely little set you have! If really concerned you could always try the horizontal flip, see if it still holds up.

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              • Frost Drive
                Frost Drive last edited by

                When they said the eyes look wonky, they probably meant that they look lazy. The creatures are all fine, and bucket kid is too. But all the girls got very subtle lazy eyes. Just move their pupils a tiny bit and it'll be good!

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                • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
                  Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG @Nico Ecenarro last edited by

                  @Nico-Ecenarro @Daisy Yes, this is a great tip from Nico.

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